homework

2012-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

1. What's your name? I'm Tina 2. Where do you live now? I live in Jeonju city Korea. 3. Where do you work? I work as a tutor. 4. Who are the people in your family? MY family number is four,Mom and a son,a daughter,my pet My husband lives apart from my family because his job. 5. What do you like to do in your free time? I like to watch a TV or go out drinking with my friends.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]! Thank you for taking the time to make your homework. I appreciate it. Very good answers! Just make sure to end your sentence with a period ( .) and to capitalize proper nouns. Kindly check the corrections I made for you. Have an awesome sleep tonight! T. LENY 1. What\'s your name?I\'m Tina >> I\'m Tina. * Do not forget to end your sentence with a period (.).2. Where do you live now?I live in Jeonju city Korea. >> I live in Jeonju City Korea.3. Where do you work?I work as a tutor. >> Correct! *However, the question is \"WHERE\" so answer with a place or your company maybe. >> I work at _____.4. Who are the people in your family?MY family number is four,Mom and a son,a daughter,my pet >> We are all four in the family: me, my son, my daughter and my pet.My husband lives apart from my family because his job. >> My husband lives apart from my family because of his job. >> OR My husband lives away from my family because of his job.5. What do you like to do in your free time? I like to watch a TV or go out drinking with my friends. >> I like to watch TV or to go out and drink with my friends. >> OR I like watching TV and drinking with my friends.  

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