homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What's your name?
I'm Tina
2. Where do you live now?
I live in Jeonju city Korea.
3. Where do you work?
I work as a tutor.
4. Who are the people in your family?
MY family number is four,Mom and a son,a daughter,my pet
My husband lives apart from my family because his job.
5. What do you like to do in your free time?
I like to watch a TV or go out drinking with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Thank you for taking the time to make your homework. I appreciate it.
Very good answers! Just make sure to end your sentence with a period ( .) and to capitalize proper nouns. Kindly check the corrections I made for you.
Have an awesome sleep tonight!
T. LENY
1. What\'s your name?I\'m Tina
>> I\'m Tina. * Do not forget to end your sentence with a period (.).2. Where do you live now?I live in Jeonju city Korea.
>> I live in Jeonju City Korea.3. Where do you work?I work as a tutor.
>> Correct! *However, the question is \"WHERE\" so answer with a place or your company maybe.
>> I work at _____.4. Who are the people in your family?MY family number is four,Mom and a son,a daughter,my pet
>> We are all four in the family: me, my son, my daughter and my pet.My husband lives apart from my family because his job.
>> My husband lives apart from my family because of his job.
>> OR My husband lives away from my family because of his job.5. What do you like to do in your free time? I like to watch a TV or go out drinking with my friends.
>> I like to watch TV or to go out and drink with my friends.
>> OR I like watching TV and drinking with my friends.
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