Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Nice to meet you, Alice!
First of all thanks for telling me that I look young.
But if you see me closer, you will don't think it.
I'd like to communicate with foreigner because I often use English at work.
So I want to practice talking in English.
I did my homework and want to you check my email written below.
1. Have you _begun_ studying for the TOEFL exam yet?
2. Dave has _begun_ his Quiz Center.
3. Benjamin _broke_ Dave's glasses.
4. Have you ever _broken_ a promise?
5. Dave _did the painting by himself.
Dear [Name]. A
I know that your hotel will be in Sinchon, is it right?
On June 14, you will go to Sinchon after dinner with us,
and in the morning of June 15, you will visit our office.
But Sinchon is far from our office, so you will be tired.
How about this? Dr. B suggests we will reserve hotel rooms around our office for you, Prof C, and Mr. D.
Can you cancel a hotel reservation If you already reserved your hotel?
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
It is my pleasure to meet you. I would like to thank you for showing your interest in studying English. I know that in no time you will perfect speaking it. You are dedicated and motivated so I know that you will succeed in studying English. More practice and you will do great. See you later!Enthusiastically,
~Teacher Alice
Here are my corrections for you:
Nice to meet you, Alice!
>>CORRECT
First of all thanks for telling me that I look young.
>>CORRECT
>> OR First of all, I would like to thank you for telling me I look young.But if you see me closer, you will don\'t think it.
>>But if you look at me closer, you won\'t think of it.I\'d like to communicate with foreigner because I often use English at work.
>>CORRECT So I want to practice talking in English.
>>CORRECT I did my homework and want to you check my email written below.]
>>I did my homework and I want you to check my email written below.1. Have you _begun_ studying for the TOEFL exam yet?
>>CORRECT 2. Dave has _begun_ his Quiz Center.
>>CORRECT 3. Benjamin _broke_ Dave\'s glasses.
>>CORRECT 4. Have you ever _broken_ a promise?
>>CORRECT
5. Dave _did the painting by himself.>>CORRECT Dear [Name]. A
>> Dear [Name]. A,
I know that your hotel will be in Sinchon, is it right?
>> I know that your hotel will be in Sinchon, is that right?
On June 14, you will go to Sinchon after dinner with us,
>>On June 14th, you will go to Sinchon after having dinner with us, and in the morning of June 15, you will visit our office.
>>CORRECT
>> OR and in the next morning, you will visit our office.But Sinchon is far from our office, so you will be tired.
>>CORRECT
>> But Sinchon is far from our office, so you might get tired. How about this? Dr. B suggests we will reserve hotel rooms around our office for you, Prof C, and Mr. D.
>> How about this, Dr. B suggested us to reserve hotel rooms nearby our office for you, Prof C, and Mr. D.
Can you cancel a hotel reservation If you already reserved your hotel?
>>Can you cancel your hotel reservation if you already reserved one?I am looking forward to hearing from you.
>>CORRECT [이름]
>>CORRECT
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