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2012-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) Did they read the instructions before they switched on the mobile phone? (they/to read) 2) Did the girl learn the new words before she texted her friend? (the girl/to learn) 3) Did they ring the office before they drove away? (they/to ring) 4) What did Lucy do before she turned on the TV? (Lucy/to do) 5) Did Walter update the software before he switched off the computer? (Walter/to update) I saw your correction about my composition yesterday. You said that you waited my composition. It's an honor to me and I'm very happy. I wanted to say that in the last class. I always appreciate you.^^ Actually I felt seek yesterday. I felt diggy yesterday despite not drinking. I took your call with lying on the bed. Maybe I should be anaemic. Nowadays, I eat only lunch. But it didn't lose my weight no longer and I have a bad appetite. I will stop going on a diet for my health. But I am not hungry when I don't eat anything.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you so much for appreciating me.T.T Im really thankful that you became my student, coz not only I have a student but likewise a friend and a sister.. :) By the way, I think my dear you should stop dieting, dont kill yourself!!kkkk,kidding.. I mean, you should always take care of yourself alright? Talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..:* xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) Did they read the instructions before they switched on the mobile phone? (they/to read) >>correct2) Did the girl learn the new words before she texted her friend? (the girl/to learn) >>correct3) Did they ring the office before they drove away? (they/to ring) >>correct4) What did Lucy do before she turned on the TV? (Lucy/to do) >>correct5) Did Walter update the software before he switched off the computer? (Walter/to update)>>correctI saw your correction about my composition yesterday. >>correctYou said that you waited my composition. >>You said that you waited for my composition.It\'s an honor to me and I\'m very happy. >>I\'m very happy to hear that and that was an honor for me.I wanted to say that in the last class. >>correct >>I wanted to tell you that last night.I always appreciate you.^^ >>correctActually I felt seek yesterday. >>Actually I felt sick yesterday.I felt diggy yesterday despite not drinking. >>I felt nauseous and dizzy yesterday despite the fact that I didn\'t drink.I took your call with lying on the bed. >>I answered your call while lying on my bed.Maybe I should be anaemic. >>I think Im anemic.Nowadays, I eat only lunch. >>correct >>Nowadays I only eat lunch.But it didn\'t lose my weight no longer and I have a bad appetite. >>correctI will stop going on a diet for my health. >>correctBut I am not hungry when I don\'t eat anything. >>correct

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