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2012-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) I did my Maths homework yesterday. (to do) 2) Did Susan go to England by plane? (to go) 3) They visited a farm two weeks ago. (to visit) 4) Jenny and Peggy didn't help their brother. (not/to help) 5) The children were not at home last weekend. (not/to be) I'm not hungry despite I only eat lunch. I eat a lot less than I used to. Doctors adviced that we have to reduce the size of our meal as we get old. So I thought my condition is good. But I have a problem. I will eat four times over a day in my trip. Thailander people eat a little at a time and frequently have a meal. So I planned I should frequently go to the restaurant like them. I even have a plan to visit a buffet. I ate the phat thai at the food court in the department. The phat thai is fried noodle with bean sprouts. I know it is Thailand's traditional food. Thailander food is very delicios. These days, I have a bad appetite. Will I succeed my plan? I need to practice eating. kkk

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Hello Miss. [Name], Thank you for dropping by to make your homework..:) You know that I always appreciate you doing that for me.:* By the way, I think my dear you really need to practice eating, kkk..Ajah Miss. [Name]!:D It\'s better to have small frequent feedings than eating onky once or twice but a lot,so you just have to take care of yourself. Talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..:) xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) I did my Maths homework yesterday. (to do) >>correct2) Did Susan go to England by plane? (to go) >>correct3) They visited a farm two weeks ago. (to visit) >>correct4) Jenny and Peggy didn\'t help their brother. (not/to help) >>correct5) The children were not at home last weekend. (not/to be) >>correctI\'m not hungry despite I only eat lunch. >>correct >>I didn\'t feel hungry despite the fact that I only ate lunch.I eat a lot less than I used to. >>correctDoctors adviced that we have to reduce the size of our meal as we get old. >>Doctors adviced me to reduce the amount of our meal as we get old.So I thought my condition is good. >>correctBut I have a problem. >>correctI will eat four times over a day in my trip. >>correct >>I will eat 4 times a day in my trip.Thailander people eat a little at a time and frequently have a meal. >>correctSo I planned I should frequently go to the restaurant like them. >>correct >>So I planned to frequently go to restaurants like them.I even have a plan to visit a buffet. >>correctI ate the phat thai at the food court in the department. >>correctThe phat thai is fried noodle with bean sprouts. >>Phat Thai is a fried noodle with bean sprouts.I know it is Thailand\'s traditional food. >>correctThailander food is very delicios. >>correctThese days, I have a bad appetite. >>correctWill I succeed my plan? I need to practice eating. kkk >>correct >>Will I succeed implementing my plan? I need to practice eating, kkkk

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