homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) I did my Maths homework yesterday. (to do)
2) Did Susan go to England by plane? (to go)
3) They visited a farm two weeks ago. (to visit)
4) Jenny and Peggy didn't help their brother. (not/to help)
5) The children were not at home last weekend. (not/to be)
I'm not hungry despite I only eat lunch.
I eat a lot less than I used to.
Doctors adviced that we have to reduce the size of our meal as we get old.
So I thought my condition is good.
But I have a problem.
I will eat four times over a day in my trip.
Thailander people eat a little at a time and frequently have a meal.
So I planned I should frequently go to the restaurant like them.
I even have a plan to visit a buffet.
I ate the phat thai at the food court in the department.
The phat thai is fried noodle with bean sprouts.
I know it is Thailand's traditional food.
Thailander food is very delicios.
These days, I have a bad appetite.
Will I succeed my plan? I need to practice eating. kkk
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name],
Thank you for dropping by to make your homework..:)
You know that I always appreciate you doing that for me.:*
By the way, I think my dear you really need to practice eating, kkk..Ajah Miss. [Name]!:D
It\'s better to have small frequent feedings than eating onky once or twice but a lot,so you just have to take care of yourself.
Talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..:)
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
1) I did my Maths homework yesterday. (to do)
>>correct2) Did Susan go to England by plane? (to go)
>>correct3) They visited a farm two weeks ago. (to visit)
>>correct4) Jenny and Peggy didn\'t help their brother. (not/to help)
>>correct5) The children were not at home last weekend. (not/to be)
>>correctI\'m not hungry despite I only eat lunch.
>>correct
>>I didn\'t feel hungry despite the fact that I only ate lunch.I eat a lot less than I used to.
>>correctDoctors adviced that we have to reduce the size of our meal as we get old.
>>Doctors adviced me to reduce the amount of our meal as we get old.So I thought my condition is good.
>>correctBut I have a problem.
>>correctI will eat four times over a day in my trip.
>>correct
>>I will eat 4 times a day in my trip.Thailander people eat a little at a time and frequently have a meal.
>>correctSo I planned I should frequently go to the restaurant like them.
>>correct
>>So I planned to frequently go to restaurants like them.I even have a plan to visit a buffet.
>>correctI ate the phat thai at the food court in the department.
>>correctThe phat thai is fried noodle with bean sprouts.
>>Phat Thai is a fried noodle with bean sprouts.I know it is Thailand\'s traditional food.
>>correctThailander food is very delicios.
>>correctThese days, I have a bad appetite.
>>correctWill I succeed my plan? I need to practice eating. kkk
>>correct
>>Will I succeed implementing my plan? I need to practice eating, kkkk
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