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2012-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) Do they live in a house? Don't they live in a house? 2) Why did Jim buy the old guitar? Why didn't Jim buy the old guitar? 3) Have you been to Canada? Haven't you been to Canada? 4) Whose brother can sing? Whose brother can't sing? 5) Does Alex like garlic? Doesn't Alex like garlic? I used to go to the public library after work in Summer. Because it's very cool there. I don't go there for reading, I just avoid the heat. I heard sad news related library. The library will be temporarily closed this Saturday for 2 months. It will be scheduled pipe work. Librarian said that it will be closed for user's safety and not using toilet. Where can I go to avoid the heat in hot Summer? Maybe I will be in to the department, shopping mall, mart... Seeing is wanting. Maybe I will be a begger after Summer.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], Wow, I think that was a very sad news,and the problem here is for you where to go to avoid heat during Summer? Hmmm, why not just stay in your apartment anduse you airconditioner?:D I know you\'ve already cleaned that up right?kkk Anyway, we can talk more about that later in our class Miss. [Name]. Take care always and have a good day.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) Do they live in a house?Don\'t they live in a house? >>correct2) Why did Jim buy the old guitar?Why didn\'t Jim buy the old guitar? >>correct3) Have you been to Canada?Haven\'t you been to Canada? >>correct4) Whose brother can sing?Whose brother can\'t sing? >>correct5) Does Alex like garlic?Doesn\'t Alex like garlic?>>correctI used to go to the public library after work in Summer. >>correctBecause it\'s very cool there. >>correctI don\'t go there for reading, I just avoid the heat. >>correctI heard sad news related library. >>I heard a sad news relatedon the library.The library will be temporarily closed this Saturday for 2 months. >>correctIt will be scheduled pipe work. >>It will be scheduled for some pipe works.Librarian said that it will be closed for user\'s safety and not using toilet. >>correctWhere can I go to avoid the heat in hot Summer? >>correctMaybe I will be in to the department, shopping mall, mart... >>correctSeeing is wanting. >>correctMaybe I will be a begger after Summer. >>correct  

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