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Hello my dear [이름]!!! How was your weekend? I hope you had a fantastic one ^^ Your answer is very good. You only made a minor mistake (= I admire eagles because they are very magestic and they can soar high in the sky. Anyway, as for me, I would probably be a panda because they are soooo chuuuubbby, okay okay, maybe even fat T.T kkkk But they like relaxing just like me. Laying around all the time haha. Pandas are very cuddly too that\'s why a panda is my favorite animal. Talk to you later!
~t.Karen (.-___-)
If I will be an animal, I would like to be an eagel because I can fly high.
>> ** Be careful of your spelingL EAGLE
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