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2012-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) Has anyone seen my bag? 2) My teacher asked me something . 3) Can I have something to drink? 4) Don't worry. Anyone can tell you where the post-office in this town is. 5) I don't know anything about it. I went to the beauty shop to cut and get a perm last Saturday. I bought a coupon to get a perm at the beauty shop. My favorite beauty shop is in Daegu. I went there first. So I didn't know who have a good skill. They assigned someone to me. She had a beautiful long hair. I believed that she has a good skill. I told her the stlye that I want. She noded her head and started to cut my hair. I closed my eyes while my hair was cut. After a minute, I opened my eyes and I suprised at my hair. My hair was cut shorter than I wanted. Oh my god!! I looked like old woman. I hope my hair fast grows.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], happy Monday! I think you had a great weekend coz you even had your hair cut and your perm. But I\'m sorry to hear that you didn\'t quite like your hair style, dont worry it will grow again my dear.:D ANyway, maybe we can talk more about your hair later in our class. Take care my dear ^^ xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) Has anyone seen my bag? >>correct2) My teacher asked me something . >>correct3) Can I have something to drink? >>correct4) Don\'t worry. Anyone can tell you where the post-office in this town is. >>correct 5) I don\'t know anything about it.>>correctI went to the beauty shop to cut and get a perm last Saturday. >>correct >>I went to he hair salon to have my hair cut and prm last Saturday.I bought a coupon to get a perm at the beauty shop. >>correctMy favorite beauty shop is in Daegu. >>correctI went there first. >>correctSo I didn\'t know who have a good skill. >>But I\'m not familiar who among them has a good skill.They assigned someone to me. >>correctShe had a beautiful long hair. >>correct >>She has a long beautiful hair.I believed that she has a good skill. >>correctI told her the stlye that I want. >>correctShe noded her head and started to cut my hair. >>correctI closed my eyes while my hair was cut. >>I closed my eyes while having my hair cut.After a minute, I opened my eyes and I suprised at my hair. >>After a minute, I opened my eyes and I was surprised with my hair.My hair was cut shorter than I wanted. >>correctOh my god!! >>correctI looked like old woman. >>correctI hope my hair fast grows. >>I hope my hair would grow really fast.

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