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2012-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1.Although it contains many difficult words, I can read this book now. 2.But I couldn't have read it last year. 3.Because there were many long words which I couldn't understand. 4.When you receive the new books can I try to read one of them? 5.I can't understand why you won't let me. A foreign priest visited our library yesterday. He looked around our library. And He seemed to find some books. But I couldn't talk to him. I was afraid of his misunderstanding that I could speak English well. Finally he went with not finding some books. If he come again our library, I will talk him as follows and I will help to find the thing that he wants. Hello~ May I help you? I'm a librarian. I'm in charge of periodicals and thesis. What kind of materials do you want? I can't speak English well, but I'll help you as I can. Tell me keyword that you want. Next..I'm not able to prepare next because I don't know what happen later.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], Wow, a foreign priest visited your library today?You shouldve approached him my dear, you might as well have the chance to talk to him,kkk..:D Anyway, you still have a lot of chances to meet foreigners my dear.. Talk to you later Miss. [Name] and take care always..:) xoxoTeacher cam^^ 1.Although it contains many difficult words, I can read this book now.>>correct2.But I couldn\'t have read it last year.>>correct3.Because there were many long words which I couldn\'t understand.>>correct4.When you receive the new books can I try to read one of them?>>correct5.I can\'t understand why you won\'t let me.>>correctA foreign priest visited our library yesterday. >>correctHe looked around our library. >>correctAnd He seemed to find some books. >>correctBut I couldn\'t talk to him. >>correctI was afraid of his misunderstanding that I could speak English well. >>correctFinally he went with not finding some books. >>Finally he went out finding no books.If he come again our library, I will talk him as follows and I will help to find the thing that he wants.>>If he would visit our library again, I will talk to him and help him find the books that he wants.Hello~ May I help you? >>correctI\'m a librarian. I\'m in charge of periodicals and thesis. >>correctWhat kind of materials do you want? >>correctI can\'t speak English well, but I\'ll help you as I can. >>I can\'t speak English well but I will do my best to help you.Tell me keyword that you want.>>tell me the keyword that you are looking for.Next..I\'m not able to prepare next because I don\'t know what happen later. >>Im not able to prepare for the next part because I dont know what will happen next..:D

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