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2012-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Hi, Alice! I was sorry I turned off my camera yesterday. I'm usually in bed shape when we meet because the time of my class is too late and I have to go to sleep after class. So I hope you understand it. I did my homework and it's written below. The most important thing in my life is honesty because if I don't be honest, I never have confidence. It means I will not succeed and I will be not happy. So I always try to don't lie to everyone. Another one I think importantly is what i want to do. I'd like to work what I like because I will keep going my career and I really want to be professionalist in my job. So when I got a new job, I considered work I will do more than the money. Finally I want to be happy and free, so I often think how to be happy.

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Hi there [이름]! Thank you for making your homework. Very well said! ^^ I admire you for following your dreams and to choose a job where you really want to be. Honesty is indeed one of the most important values in life. Great! ^^ Anyway, I had talking with you tonight! Enthusiastically, ~Teacher Alice Hi, Alice! >> Hi Alice!I was sorry I turned off my camera yesterday. >> I was sorry I have turned off my camera yesterday. >> OR I am sorry I turned off my camera yesterday.I\'m usually in bed shape when we meet because the time of my class is too late and I have to go to sleep after class. >> I\'m usually in bad shape during our class time because our time is very late and I have to go to sleep after class. *Did you mean this way? >> OR I\'m usually in my sleeping mode during our class time because our time very too late and I have to go to sleep after class. So I hope you understand it. >> Correct! *Of course! Not a problem. :)I did my homework and it\'s written below. >> Correct!The most important thing in my life is honesty because if I don\'t be honest, I never have confidence. >> Correct! >> OR The most important thing in my life is honesty because if I won\'t be honest, I will never gain confidence. It means I will not succeed and I will be not happy. >> It means I will not succeed and I will be not happy if I lie. So I always try to don\'t lie to everyone. >> So I always try not lie to everyone. >> OR So I always try to be truthful to everyone. >> OR So I always try to be honest to everyone. Another one I think importantly is what i want to do. >> Another important thing for me is what I want to do. I\'d like to work what I like because I will keep going my career and I really want to be professionalist in my job. >> I\'d like to work in line with what I like because I will keep going through my career. I really want to be professional in my job. *Sure you will! So when I got a new job, I considered work I will do more than the money. >> So when I get a new job, I always consider my work and will work more than the money. Finally I want to be happy and free, so I often think how to be happy. >> Correct!

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