homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Answer:
The class plays football.
What does the class play?
1) John is writing a letter.<<What is he doing?
___________?
2) She walks home from school.<<How does she go to school?
___________?
3) The children are sitting in the garden.<<Where are the children?
___________?
4) Peter runs with his dog on Sundays.<<What does he do on sundays?
5) My rabbit has a cage in the garden.<<Where is your rabbit's cage?
I hate to tell you this story, I changed my lesson time into the morning.
I thought that 8 was the good time for me to be lectured.
However, I was distracted by the envirmont that I was in.
As you know, I do work. In addition, I have to play a role as a housewife.
So whenever I got your phone call, I was in the middle of the doing something.
There is no doubt that you are a good teacher.
But I made my mind to change my lesson time before I go to work.
This time is only peaceful time when I can talk to a teacher of your comany.
Sorry.
강사 첨삭
Hi! Thanks for doing your homework. Here are my corrections please review them. I\'m sorry to hear about your change of class time. :( Let\'s talk about this matter later.
~Teacher Dianne~
Answer:
>> Answers:The class plays football.What does the class play? >> CORRECT1) John is writing a letter.
<<What is he doing?>> What is John writing?2) She walks home from school.
<<How does she go to school?>> Who walks home from school?3) The children are sitting in the garden.
<<Where are the children?>> CORRECT
OR >> Where are the children sitting?4) Peter runs with his dog on Sundays.
<<What does he do on sundays?>> When does Peter run with his dog?5) My rabbit has a cage in the garden.
<<Where is your rabbit\'s cage?>> What does your rabbit have in the garden?I hate to tell you this story, I changed my lesson time into the morning.
>> I hate to tell you about this but I moved my class time in the morning.I thought that 8 was the good time for me to be lectured.
>> I thought that 8 was a good time for me to have my class.However, I was distracted by the envirmont that I was in.
>> CORRECT
OR >> However, I was distracted by the environment that I was in.As you know, I do work.
>> CORRECT
OR >> As you know, I have to work.
In addition, I have to play a role as a housewife.
>> In addition to that, I am also a housewife.So whenever I got your phone call, I was in the middle of the doing something.
>> CORRECTOR >> So whenever I receive your phone call, I was in the middle of doing something.There is no doubt that you are a good teacher.
>> CORRECTBut I made my mind to change my lesson time before I go to work.
>> But I made up my mind to change my lesson time before I go to work.This time is only peaceful time when I can talk to a teacher of your comany.
>> This is the only peaceful time for me to talk to a teacher in your company.Sorry.
>> CORRECT
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