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2012-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Answer: The class plays football. What does the class play? 1) John is writing a letter.<<What is he doing? ___________? 2) She walks home from school.<<How does she go to school? ___________? 3) The children are sitting in the garden.<<Where are the children? ___________? 4) Peter runs with his dog on Sundays.<<What does he do on sundays? 5) My rabbit has a cage in the garden.<<Where is your rabbit's cage? I hate to tell you this story, I changed my lesson time into the morning. I thought that 8 was the good time for me to be lectured. However, I was distracted by the envirmont that I was in. As you know, I do work. In addition, I have to play a role as a housewife. So whenever I got your phone call, I was in the middle of the doing something. There is no doubt that you are a good teacher. But I made my mind to change my lesson time before I go to work. This time is only peaceful time when I can talk to a teacher of your comany. Sorry.

강사 첨삭

Hi! Thanks for doing your homework. Here are my corrections please review them. I\'m sorry to hear about your change of class time. :( Let\'s talk about this matter later. ~Teacher Dianne~ Answer: >> Answers:The class plays football.What does the class play? >> CORRECT1) John is writing a letter. <<What is he doing?>> What is John writing?2) She walks home from school. <<How does she go to school?>> Who walks home from school?3) The children are sitting in the garden. <<Where are the children?>> CORRECT OR >> Where are the children sitting?4) Peter runs with his dog on Sundays. <<What does he do on sundays?>> When does Peter run with his dog?5) My rabbit has a cage in the garden. <<Where is your rabbit\'s cage?>> What does your rabbit have in the garden?I hate to tell you this story, I changed my lesson time into the morning. >> I hate to tell you about this but I moved my class time in the morning.I thought that 8 was the good time for me to be lectured. >> I thought that 8 was a good time for me to have my class.However, I was distracted by the envirmont that I was in. >> CORRECT OR >> However, I was distracted by the environment that I was in.As you know, I do work. >> CORRECT OR >> As you know, I have to work. In addition, I have to play a role as a housewife. >> In addition to that, I am also a housewife.So whenever I got your phone call, I was in the middle of the doing something. >> CORRECTOR >> So whenever I receive your phone call, I was in the middle of doing something.There is no doubt that you are a good teacher. >> CORRECTBut I made my mind to change my lesson time before I go to work. >> But I made up my mind to change my lesson time before I go to work.This time is only peaceful time when I can talk to a teacher of your comany. >> This is the only peaceful time for me to talk to a teacher in your company.Sorry. >> CORRECT

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