Homework
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If I could go back to another time and space, I want to go the Joseon Dynasty period of Korea. There are one couple who loved each other. I want to be the women of couple because they have a beautiful and heartbreaking story. It' similar to the story of Romio and Juliet. Last year, I watched their story on TV. Watching TV, I often cried because it was so sad. But I'd like to love someone like them.
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Hi [이름]!
Oh I just got your homework! Thanks! Good work!
Joseon Dynasty\'s time seems to be interesting and I think Korea\'s history is exciting in general. Good choice!
Anyway, you did good tonight, [이름]. I am so proud of you.
I will see you again tomorrow! Good night!
Enthusiastically,
~Teacher Alice~
If I could go back to another time and space, I want to go the Joseon Dynasty period of Korea.
>> If I could go back to another time and space, I would go to the Joseon Dynasty period in Korea.
There are one couple who loved each other.
>> There\'s one couple who loved each other. *Couple is considered singular here.
I want to be the women of couple because they have a beautiful and heartbreaking story.
>> I want to be the woman and I want to experience their beautiful and heartbreaking story.
It\' similar to the story of Romio and Juliet.
>> It\'s similar to the story of Romeo and Juliet.
Last year, I watched their story on TV.
>> Last year, I have watched their story on TV.
Watching TV, I often cried because it was so sad.
>> As I watched that on TV, I often cried because it was so saddening.
But I\'d like to love someone like them.
>> But I\'d like to love someone the way they love each other.
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