HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Kelly! Good day! I listend popsong - "Never say Never by The Fray" you requested yesterday night. This song's story is very impressive for me because I broke up my grilfriend 3 months ago. Also on my way to work today morning, I listend again this song by missing old girlfriend.
Thanks to your recommendation of popsong, maybe I would enjoy listenning popsong whenever going to work. Today, I will listen to the other song you recommend before sleeping in home.
Additional to above my diary, I submit Homework to you as below ;
* HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Complete the following sentences with IN CASE or UNLESS.
1. Emma won't call you ___________ you give her your phone number.
2. Take a map with you ____________ you can't find the hotel.
3. Ask for a receipt __________ you need it later.
4. ______________ fire, press the red button.
5. I won't lend you my car ____________ you promise to drive carefully.
-> 1. Unless / 2. In case / 3. In case / 4. In case / Unless.
See you:)
강사 첨삭
Hello there! Thank you for your composition. I\'m so glad that you like the songs that I recommended. Those are my favorites. And I\'m sorry to hear that you are missing your X girlfriend because of the song that I shared with you. Anyway, have a great day. See you in class.
__T. Kelly_
Hi, Kelly!
>> Hi Kelly!
Good day!
>>Correct!
I listend popsong - \"Never say Never by The Fray\" you requested yesterday night.
>> Last night, I listened to the song Never Say Never by The Fray.
This song\'s story is very impressive for me because I broke up my grilfriend 3 months ago.
>> I was touched with the lyrics of the song because I broke up with my girlfriend three months ago.
Also on my way to work today morning, I listend again this song by missing old girlfriend.
>> On my way to work, I listened to the song again and now I\'m missing my X/former girlfriend. Thanks to your recommendation of popsong, maybe I would enjoy listenning popsong whenever going to work.
>> Thanks for recommending those songs, now I can enjoy listening to pop songs whenever I go to work.
Today, I will listen to the other song you recommend before sleeping in home.
>> Today, I am going to listen to the other songs that you recommended.Additional to above my diary, I submit Homework to you as below ;
>> In addition to the diary that I made is my homework for today.
* HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Complete the following sentences with IN CASE or UNLESS. 1. Emma won\'t call you ___________ you give her your phone number.
>>Correct!
2. Take a map with you ____________ you can\'t find the hotel.
>>Correct!3. Ask for a receipt __________ you need it later.
>>Correct!4. ______________ fire, press the red button.
>>Correct!5. I won\'t lend you my car ____________ you promise to drive carefully.
>>Correct!-> 1. Unless / 2. In case / 3. In case / 4. In case / Unless.See you:)
>>Correct!
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