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2012-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi, Kelly! Good day! I listend popsong - "Never say Never by The Fray" you requested yesterday night. This song's story is very impressive for me because I broke up my grilfriend 3 months ago. Also on my way to work today morning, I listend again this song by missing old girlfriend. Thanks to your recommendation of popsong, maybe I would enjoy listenning popsong whenever going to work. Today, I will listen to the other song you recommend before sleeping in home. Additional to above my diary, I submit Homework to you as below ; * HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Complete the following sentences with IN CASE or UNLESS. 1. Emma won't call you ___________ you give her your phone number. 2. Take a map with you ____________ you can't find the hotel. 3. Ask for a receipt __________ you need it later. 4. ______________ fire, press the red button. 5. I won't lend you my car ____________ you promise to drive carefully. -> 1. Unless / 2. In case / 3. In case / 4. In case / Unless. See you:)

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for your composition. I\'m so glad that you like the songs that I recommended. Those are my favorites. And I\'m sorry to hear that you are missing your X girlfriend because of the song that I shared with you. Anyway, have a great day. See you in class. __T. Kelly_ Hi, Kelly! >> Hi Kelly! Good day! >>Correct! I listend popsong - \"Never say Never by The Fray\" you requested yesterday night. >> Last night, I listened to  the song Never Say Never by The Fray. This song\'s story is very impressive for me because I broke up my grilfriend 3 months ago. >> I was touched with the lyrics of the song because I broke up with my girlfriend three months ago.  Also on my way to work today morning, I listend again this song by missing old girlfriend. >> On my way to work, I listened to the song again and now I\'m missing my X/former girlfriend. Thanks to your recommendation of popsong, maybe I would enjoy listenning popsong whenever going to work. >> Thanks for recommending those songs, now I can enjoy listening to pop songs whenever I go to work. Today, I will listen to the other song you recommend before sleeping in home. >> Today, I am going to listen to the other songs that you recommended.Additional to above my diary, I submit Homework to you as below ; >> In addition to the diary that I made is my homework for today. * HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Complete the following sentences with IN CASE or UNLESS. 1. Emma won\'t call you ___________ you give her your phone number. >>Correct! 2. Take a map with you ____________ you can\'t find the hotel. >>Correct!3. Ask for a receipt __________ you need it later. >>Correct!4. ______________ fire, press the red button. >>Correct!5. I won\'t lend you my car ____________ you promise to drive carefully. >>Correct!-> 1. Unless / 2. In case / 3. In case / 4. In case / Unless.See you:) >>Correct!

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