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2012-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) It's a terrible day today. (terrible) 2) She sings the song well. (good) 3) He is a careful driver. (careful) 4) He drives the car carefully . (careful) 5) The dog barks loudly. (loud) Our company will go to employee training for 3 days next Wednesday. I don't want to go. We will stay the forest lodge on the mountain. There are many worm and bug. I'm scared of worm. Someone should press a drink on to me. I'm a poor drinker. We will go to a temple for sightseeing. I like seeing a temple and walking around temple. But I don't like climbing a mountain. We will have to climb a mountain to go to a temple. I have a delicate skin. My skin burns easily. Thease days, ene of the my worries is freckles. My face is covered with freckles. Employee training programs have many outdoor activities. Despite everything, it's fortunate that I will escape out employee training at second day.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], Thank you for telling me something about your training, I do hope you will enjoy that coz it really sounds so interesting! Let\'s talk more about this later in our class Miss. [Name]..:) Talk to you then.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) It\'s a terrible day today. (terrible) >>correct2) She sings the song well. (good) >>correct3) He is a careful driver. (careful) >>correct4) He drives the car carefully . (careful) >>correct5) The dog barks loudly. (loud)>>correctOur company will go to employee training for 3 days next Wednesday. >>OUr company will have the employee training for 3 days next Wednesday.I don\'t want to go. >>correctWe will stay the forest lodge on the mountain. >>We will stay in the forest lodge in the mountain.There are many worm and bug. >>There will many worms and bugs in that area.I\'m scared of worm. >>correctSomeone should press a drink on to me. >>Someone should pass a drink onto me.I\'m a poor drinker. >>My alcohol tolerance is bad.We will go to a temple for sightseeing. >>correctI like seeing a temple and walking around temple. >>I like looking at a temple and walking around it.But I don\'t like climbing a mountain. >>correctWe will have to climb a mountain to go to a temple. >>We must climb a mountain inorder for us to reach the temple.I have a delicate skin. My skin burns easily. >>correctThease days, ene of the my worries is freckles. >>These days, one of my worries is my freckles.My face is covered with freckles. >>correctEmployee training programs have many outdoor activities.>>correct Despite everything, it\'s fortunate that I will escape out employee training at second day. >>Despite everything, it\'s fortunate that I can escape out of the employee training on the second day.   

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