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Maybe, tomorrow, I would be in the car which will be heading to Tong-Young when you will call me.I am going to travel with my hubby.
So I am worried about the moments I will get your phone call.
But, it okay.
I will stock my left ear with my left hand, holding my phone with right hand.
I don't like to postphone my phone class because of like this reason.
I wll be acceptible all of sudden situations when I get your phone call.
My best period was absolutely in the 1st grade in university.
It was already 14 year's ago.At that thim, I was so cheerful, positive and optimist.I loved hanging around with my classmates and I had a eagerness to join the club.
So I had busy days.
Of course, I studied very hard to gain fellowships.
Actually, I got fellowships every semesters.
As you know, 20years'girl doesn't need to worry about money.
After entering a society, I know that life is not easy but hard and difficult.
But all of adults have to accept the fact that life is like a war.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Wow! It is nice to know that you are going to travel with your husband. ^^ It's a great time to make your relationship stronger. Have a safe travel! Tell me about it on Monday!
Nice composition you have here. You took time to reminisce your best period in life.
Just be careful with the spelling of some words.
T. Dianne
Maybe, tomorrow, I would be in the car which will be heading to Tong-Young when you will call me.
>>Correct
I am going to travel with my hubby.
>>CorrectSo I am worried about the moments I will get your phone call.
>>So I am worried about the moments when I will get your phone call.But, it okay.
>>But, it is okay.I will stock my left ear with my left hand, holding my phone with right hand.
>>I will cover my left ear with my left hand, holding my phone with my right hand.I don\'t like to postphone my phone class because of like this reason.
>>I don\'t like to postpone my phone class because of this kind of reason.I wll be acceptible all of sudden situations when I get your phone call.
>>I will be accepting any sudden situations when I get your phone call.My best period was absolutely in the 1st grade in university.
>>My best period in life is absolutely when I was in the 1st year in the University.It was already 14 year\'s ago.
>>It was already 14 years ago.
At that thim, I was so cheerful, positive and optimist.
>>At that time, I was so cheerful, positive and optimistic.
I loved hanging around with my classmates and I had a eagerness to join the club.
>>I loved hanging around with my classmates and I had an eagerness to join the club.So I had busy days.
>>CorrectOf course, I studied very hard to gain fellowships.
>>CorrectActually, I got fellowships every semesters.
>>Actually, I got fellowships every semester.As you know, 20years\'girl doesn\'t need to worry about money.
>>As you know, a 20 year old girl doesn\'t need to worry about money.After entering a society, I know that life is not easy but hard and difficult.
>>CorrectBut all of adults have to accept the fact that life is like a war.
>>But all adults have to accept the fact that life is like a war.
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