homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I had hardly begun to apologize when the door closed .
2. I have seldom heard such a talented singer.
3. If John had known that she liked curry, he would have brought her to an Indian restaurant.
4. The artist rarely paid any attention to his agent's advice.
5. He had never felt so depressed.
1.I hardly had...
2.I seldom have..
3.He would have....,If John...
4.
Hi,leny~~
Are you OK now?
I was worring about you.
Maybe you would be so depressed since your work.
Cheer up !!! and Let,s meet with energetic voice.
I want to know your E-mail address.
Tina's E-mail : [이메일]
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday Ms. [Name]!
Thank you for doing your homework today! Wow you are so sweet. Well I hope that you will have a great day today! I wrote all the corrections below so please have time to check it. Happy weekend!
Here are my corrections for you:
1. I had hardly begun to apologize when the door closed .
>>> Hardly had I begun to apologize when the door closed. 2. I have seldom heard such a talented singer.
>>> Seldom have I heard such a talented singer. 3. If John had known that she liked curry, he would have brought her to an Indian restaurant.
>>> Had John known that she liked curry, he would have brought her to an Indian restaurant. 4. The artist rarely paid any attention to his agent\'s advice.
>>> Rarely did the artist pay attention to his agent\'s advice. 5. He had never felt so depressed. >>> Never had he felt so depressed.Hi,leny~~
>>> Hi Leny!Are you OK now?
>>> Correct!^_^I was worring about you.
>>> I am worrying about you.
OR
>>> I am worried about you.Maybe you would be so depressed since your work.>>>Maybe you are depressed about your work.
OR
>>>Maybe you are depressed since you\'ve been working hard.^_^
Cheer up !!! and Let,s meet with energetic voice.
>>>Cheer up! Let\'s greet each other with an energetic voice.I want to know your E-mail address.
>>> Correct!Tina\'s E-mail : [이메일]
>>> Correct!
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