Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Verna~
Describe some useful ways in which computers have so far contributed to our modern life.
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How about its disadvantages?
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Please make at least five sentences.
Every system like electricity generation is based in computer.
>>Every system like electricity generation is based on computer.
It helps us make objects.
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Even though making objects is dangerous and difficult, computers deal with the job very safely and easily.
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Internet,one of computer system, interrupts to meet each other.
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Computer makes our eyes bad and emit electromagnetic waves which are harm for us.
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