homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) big -bigger -biggest
2) easy -easier - easiest
3) much -more -most
4) little -less -least
5) interesting - more interesting -most interesting
I have two accounts of Facebook.
Because I needed to extend my city on my on-line game in the Facebook.
The game is to make a city.
In order to extend the city's land, I had to add someone to my friends.
Finally, I had over 100 foreign friends.
It was not easy to find my Korean friends among them.
So, I created another account.
Recently, I logged to the Facebook by my game ID.
I noticed that some of my facebook friends live in Thailand.
One of them chatted with me on the facebook in the past.
If I had known earlier that fact, I would be friendly with him.
Am I selfish? kkk.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Miss. [Name], happy Friday!
Thank you for dropping by to make your composition..
OMG!!You chatted with a Thailander before?If you only knew that!kkk..
Anyway, was he nice?or handsome?kkk...You should always take care of yourself Miss. [Name] and donmt trust people easiyl okay?
Talk to you again later my dear..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
1) big -bigger -biggest
>>correct2) easy -easier - easiest>>correct3) much -more -most
>>correct4) little -less -least
>>correct5) interesting - more interesting -most interesting>>correctI have two accounts of Facebook.
>>correct
>>I have 2 Facebook accounts.Because I needed to extend my city on my on-line game in the Facebook.
>>correctThe game is to make a city.
>>correctIn order to extend the city\'s land, I had to add someone to my friends.
>>correctFinally, I had over 100 foreign friends.
>>correctIt was not easy to find my Korean friends among them.
>>correctSo, I created another account.>>correct
Recently, I logged to the Facebook by my game ID.
>>Recently, I logged in to my facebook using my game ID>I noticed that some of my facebook friends live in Thailand.
>>correctOne of them chatted with me on the facebook in the past.>>correct
If I had known earlier that fact, I would be friendly with him.
>>correctAm I selfish? kkk.
>>correct
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