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2012-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) big -bigger -biggest 2) easy -easier - easiest 3) much -more -most 4) little -less -least 5) interesting - more interesting -most interesting I have two accounts of Facebook. Because I needed to extend my city on my on-line game in the Facebook. The game is to make a city. In order to extend the city's land, I had to add someone to my friends. Finally, I had over 100 foreign friends. It was not easy to find my Korean friends among them. So, I created another account. Recently, I logged to the Facebook by my game ID. I noticed that some of my facebook friends live in Thailand. One of them chatted with me on the facebook in the past. If I had known earlier that fact, I would be friendly with him. Am I selfish? kkk.

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear Miss. [Name], happy Friday! Thank you for dropping by to make your composition.. OMG!!You chatted with a Thailander before?If you only knew that!kkk.. Anyway, was he nice?or handsome?kkk...You should always take care of yourself Miss. [Name] and donmt trust people easiyl okay? Talk to you again later my dear.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) big -bigger -biggest >>correct2) easy -easier - easiest>>correct3) much -more -most >>correct4) little -less -least >>correct5) interesting - more interesting -most interesting>>correctI have two accounts of Facebook. >>correct >>I have 2 Facebook accounts.Because I needed to extend my city on my on-line game in the Facebook. >>correctThe game is to make a city. >>correctIn order to extend the city\'s land, I had to add someone to my friends. >>correctFinally, I had over 100 foreign friends. >>correctIt was not easy to find my Korean friends among them. >>correctSo, I created another account.>>correct Recently, I logged to the Facebook by my game ID. >>Recently, I logged in to my facebook using my game ID>I noticed that some of my facebook friends live in Thailand. >>correctOne of them chatted with me on the facebook in the past.>>correct If I had known earlier that fact, I would be friendly with him. >>correctAm I selfish? kkk. >>correct

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