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학생이 쓴 원문
What I have learned as living my life, it is that too much kindness is not good for one's life.
I know that this is a litte bit mean.
But, it's true.
some people have been suferring from kindness that they had done.
For example, some people lend own money to someone who are asking.
Surely, some people get back his money with thanking reply.
But, some people sometimes get back only lots of doubt.
After that, they usually don't trust anyone else.
Who made this kind person like that?
The person who took money from him or her?
No!
The answer is one's too much kindness.
Actually, around me, cases like this are happening.
People sometimes use a kind person with a bad purpose.
I am a person who live having individualism.
I don't want to harm someone and I don't like helping the other people.
It sounds cold but it's me.
Only exception is to help homeless dogs.
I think that they are scapegoats of selfish of human.
강사 첨삭
Quite a strong ideals and opinions. I do respect your outlook in life. In a way I have to agree that most of the suffering we encounter in life are caused by the people around us. Anyway, this is something we could talk about in class. Till then...
T. Dianne
What I have learned as living my life, it is that too much kindness is not good for one\'s life.>>What I have learned in my life is that, too much kindness is not good for one\'s life.I know that this is a litte bit mean.>>I know that this is a little bit mean. (spelling)But, it\'s true.>>Correct!some people have been suferring from kindness that they had done.>>Some people have been sufferring from kindness that they had done.For example, some people lend own money to someone who are asking.>>For example, some people lent their money to someone who was asking.Surely, some people get back his money with thanking reply.>>Surely, some people get their money back without problems.But, some people sometimes get back only lots of doubt.>>But some people don\'tAfter that, they usually don\'t trust anyone else.>>Correct!Who made this kind person like that?>>Correct!The person who took money from him or her?>>Correct!No!>>Correct!The answer is one\'s too much kindness.>>Correct!Actually, around me, cases like this are happening.>>Correct!People sometimes use a kind person with a bad purpose.>>People sometimes uses kind people for their evil purposes.I am a person who live having individualism.>>Correct!I don\'t want to harm someone and I don\'t like helping the other people.>>I don\'t want to harm anyone and I don\'t like helping them either.It sounds cold but it\'s me.>>Correct!Only exception is to help homeless dogs.>>The only exception is to helping homeless dogs.I think that they are scapegoats of selfish of human.
>>I think that they are scapegoats of selfish humans.
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