homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) School is boring, but homework is more boring than school.
2) Skateboarding is a dangerous hobby. Bungee jumping is more dangerous than skateboarding.
3) This magazine is cheap, but that one is cheaper.
4) We live in a small house, but my grandparents' house is even smaller than ours.
5) Yesterday John told me a funny joke. This joke was the funniest joke I've ever heard.
I went to my hometown Daeugu last weekend.I attended a farewell party for our priest.When I was in Daegu, he guided our bible study.And he teached me how to ski last Winter.He will go to New York this Summer.It's not fixed exactly day that he will leave.He will care of Korean that lives in New york for 2 years.
So we gave him a farewell party.We just had a dinner for him. And we prepare the present.We bought a walking boots for him.
He will leave to Israel for pilgrimage next week.
He should walk allday.So we bought it for his foot.
We weren't sad at his leaving.Because we promised go on a trip there.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Miss. [Name], happy Monday!
Thank you so much for doing your homework..
By the way, you are such a very sweet and true friend,you guys even gave him a farewell party..^^
Talk to youlater Miss. [Name], and take care..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
1) School is boring, but homework is more boring than school.
>>correct2) Skateboarding is a dangerous hobby. Bungee jumping is more dangerous than skateboarding.
>>correct3) This magazine is cheap, but that one is cheaper. >>correct4) We live in a small house, but my grandparents\' house is even smaller than ours.
>>correct5) Yesterday John told me a funny joke. This joke was the funniest joke I\'ve ever heard.
>>correctI went to my hometown Daeugu last weekend.
>>correct
I attended a farewell party for our priest.
>>correct
When I was in Daegu, he guided our bible study.
>>correct
And he teached me how to ski last Winter.
>>And he taught me how to ski last Winter.
He will go to New York this Summer.
>>correct
It\'s not fixed exactly day that he will leave.
>>Its not yet certain when he will leave.
He will care of Korean that lives in New york for 2 years.
>>he will take care of Korean peoplewho live in New York for 2 years.So we gave him a farewell party.We just had a dinner for him.
>>correct
And we prepare the present.We bought a walking boots for him.
>>correctHe will leave to Israel for pilgrimage next week.
>>correctHe should walk allday.
>>correct
So we bought it for his foot.
>>correctWe weren\'t sad at his leaving.
>>correct
Because we promised go on a trip there.
>>because we promised him to have our trip there.
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