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2012-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi Alice! As you know, I went to the ocean expo in Yeosu, Korea. There are many exhibitions about various conturies. I saw international exhibitions of USA, Peru, Singapore and so on. I enjoyed that. Homework; I think everyone often makes mistakes including me. I try to not make a mistake, but if I make it to someone, I tell them my mistake and make a polite apology. It's not easy, but I have to do that. On the other hand, if someone makes a mistake to me, usually I forgive them once or twice. But they repeat the same errors again, I'm hard to keep out relationship going.

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Hi [이름]! WOW! I am so impressed with you write-up today. It was well written. Excellent! I commend you for always doing my pieces of advice. Keep it up! I will see you again tomorrow, [이름]! ~Teacher Alice Hi Alice! >> Correct! As you know, I went to the ocean expo in Yeosu, Korea. >> Correct! There are many exhibitions about various conturies. >> Correct! I saw international exhibitions of USA, Peru, Singapore and so on.I enjoyed that. >> Correct! Homework;I think everyone often makes mistakes including me. >> Correct! I try to not make a mistake, but if I make it to someone, I tell them my mistake and make a polite apology. >> Correct! It\'s not easy, but I have to do that. >> Correct! On the other hand, if someone makes a mistake to me, usually I forgive them once or twice. >> Correct! But they repeat the same errors again, I\'m hard to keep out relationship going. >> But when they repeat the same errors again, I can\'t keep the relationship going.

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