Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Alice!
As you know, I went to the ocean expo in Yeosu, Korea.
There are many exhibitions about various conturies.
I saw international exhibitions of USA, Peru, Singapore and so on.
I enjoyed that.
Homework;
I think everyone often makes mistakes including me.
I try to not make a mistake, but if I make it to someone,
I tell them my mistake and make a polite apology.
It's not easy, but I have to do that.
On the other hand, if someone makes a mistake to me, usually I forgive them once or twice. But they repeat the same errors again, I'm hard to keep out relationship going.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
WOW! I am so impressed with you write-up today. It was well written. Excellent!
I commend you for always doing my pieces of advice. Keep it up!
I will see you again tomorrow, [이름]!
~Teacher Alice
Hi Alice!
>> Correct! As you know, I went to the ocean expo in Yeosu, Korea.
>> Correct! There are many exhibitions about various conturies.
>> Correct! I saw international exhibitions of USA, Peru, Singapore and so on.I enjoyed that.
>> Correct! Homework;I think everyone often makes mistakes including me.
>> Correct! I try to not make a mistake, but if I make it to someone, I tell them my mistake and make a polite apology.
>> Correct! It\'s not easy, but I have to do that.
>> Correct! On the other hand, if someone makes a mistake to me, usually I forgive them once or twice.
>> Correct!
But they repeat the same errors again, I\'m hard to keep out relationship going.
>> But when they repeat the same errors again, I can\'t keep the relationship going.
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