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2012-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi. Alice. I'm really sorry about your beagle 'Tom'. I hope he will go good place. when I was an elementary school student. I had four hamsters. And I really liked it. Everyday I gave them a lot of sunflower seeds. (you know what, they really like it) And I enjoyed my rest time with them. Someday when I was not at home, My brother left house turning on Air conditioner. And when i came back home. They are all dead because of frostbite. I was really shocked. And I cried all night. I hope you cheer up.

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Hi Philip! Thank you very much for cheering me up. I trully appreciate it Philip. Oh, that\'s terrible. You lost your hamsters all at once! That was painful too. :( Our pets really make us happy so if something happens to them, it\'s frightening and we surely do cry over them. :( Anyway, you did a good job today, Philip. I will see you again tomorrow! ^^ Good night! Enthusiastically, ~Teacher Alice Hi. Alice. >> Hi Alice,I\'m really sorry about your beagle \'Tom\'. >> Correct! I hope he will go good place. >> I hope he will go to a good place.when I was an elementary school student. I had four hamsters. >> When I was an elementary school student, I had four hamsters.And I really liked it. >> And I really liked them. Everyday I gave them a lot of sunflower seeds. (you know what, they really like it) >> Correct!And I enjoyed my rest time with them. >> Correct!Someday when I was not at home, My brother left house turning on Air conditioner. >> One time, when I was not at home, m brother left our house with the aircon turned on. And when i came back home. They are all dead because of frostbite. >> When I came back home, they are all dead because of frostbite. *Oh my!I was really shocked. And I cried all night. >> I was really shocked and I cried all night. I hope you cheer up. >> Correct!

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