Homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. Alice.
I'm really sorry about your beagle 'Tom'. I hope he will go good place.
when I was an elementary school student. I had four hamsters.
And I really liked it. Everyday I gave them a lot of sunflower seeds.
(you know what, they really like it) And I enjoyed my rest time with them.
Someday when I was not at home, My brother left house turning on Air conditioner.
And when i came back home. They are all dead because of frostbite.
I was really shocked. And I cried all night.
I hope you cheer up.
강사 첨삭
Hi Philip!
Thank you very much for cheering me up. I trully appreciate it Philip.
Oh, that\'s terrible. You lost your hamsters all at once! That was painful too. :(
Our pets really make us happy so if something happens to them, it\'s frightening and we surely do cry over them. :(
Anyway, you did a good job today, Philip. I will see you again tomorrow! ^^
Good night!
Enthusiastically,
~Teacher Alice
Hi. Alice.
>> Hi Alice,I\'m really sorry about your beagle \'Tom\'.
>> Correct!
I hope he will go good place.
>> I hope he will go to a good place.when I was an elementary school student. I had four hamsters.
>> When I was an elementary school student, I had four hamsters.And I really liked it.
>> And I really liked them.
Everyday I gave them a lot of sunflower seeds. (you know what, they really like it)
>> Correct!And I enjoyed my rest time with them.
>> Correct!Someday when I was not at home, My brother left house turning on Air conditioner.
>> One time, when I was not at home, m brother left our house with the aircon turned on. And when i came back home. They are all dead because of frostbite.
>> When I came back home, they are all dead because of frostbite. *Oh my!I was really shocked. And I cried all night.
>> I was really shocked and I cried all night. I hope you cheer up.
>> Correct!
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