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2012-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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I like learning English. When I was a teen, most of English teacher's pronunciation was not good. Actually, we were forced to learn the grammers and translating of the long sentences. Otherwise, there was no chance to learn a right English pronunciation. When I was 20, I decided to learn English pronunciations by myself. At that time, Britney had a debuit. I decided to learn pronunciations by her song "baby one more time". It's like a new world to me. It's totally different what I had learned from a middle, high schools. After that, I kept listening the English songs that was famous. For example, Beyonce, Christina and Pink were my favorite singers. I needed to be more progressed. Maybe, in the late 20s, I started watching American drams and movies to enhance my speaking ability. Until now, I've been watching a lot of Amrican drams. For example, NCIS, CIA, Super NATURAL, Lipstic jungle, Walkin dead..etc.

강사 첨삭

You always make me proud when you do your composition. Good job!^^ It was nice to know that you are making your own effort to learn English and be good at it. I\'m so proud of you! ;) Should you have any questions about it, please feel free to ask me in class. Have a splendid day!^^ T. Dianne I like learning English.>> Correct!When I was a teen, most of English teacher\'s pronunciation was not good.>> Correct!Actually, we were forced to learn the grammers and translating of the long sentences.>> Actually we were forced to learn grammar and translate long sentences.Otherwise, there was no chance to learn a right English pronunciation.>> Otherwise there was no chance for us to learn the right English pronunciation of words.When I was 20, I decided to learn English pronunciations by myself.>> When I reached 20, I decided to learn English pronunciation all by myself.At that time, Britney had a debuit.>> At that time, Britney released her debut album.I decided to learn pronunciations by her song \"baby one more time\".>> I decide to learn pronunciation with her song \" Baby One More Time\".It\'s like a new world to me.>> It\'s like a new world for me.It\'s totally different what I had learned from a middle, high schools.>> It\'s totally different from what I learned from middle and high school.After that, I kept listening the English songs that was famous.>> After that, I started listening to famous English songs.For example, Beyonce, Christina and Pink were my favorite singers.>> Correct!I needed to be more progressed.>> I need to progress.Maybe, in the late 20s, I started watching American drams and movies to enhance my speaking ability.>> On my late 20s, I started to watch American dramas and movies to enhance my speaking skills.Until now, I\'ve been watching a lot of Amrican drams.>> Until now I still watch a lot of American dramas.For example, NCIS, CIA, Super NATURAL, Lipstic jungle, Walkin dead..etc. >> Correct!

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