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2012-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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different - more different - most different cruel - crueler - cruelest cheap - cheaper - cheapest easy - easier - easiest hungry - hungrier - hungrest I started packing my bag yesterday. I will go to employee training tomorrow. So I don't have enough time to pack my bag. But there were nothing in my bag yet. I just spread this and that on my room. There's no place to put my feet in my room. My heart pounded with excitement. I couldn't focus on my work. I'm so nervous. I can't foucs on writing. Sorry.. When you will call tonight, I would be calm down.

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear! Thank you so much for making your homework..:) And Miss. [Name],please relax okie?Hehehe.. Maybe we could talk more about that later in our class... Take care Miss. [Name]..:* xoxoTeacher Cam^^ different - more different - most different>>correct cruel - crueler - cruelest>>correctcheap - cheaper - cheapest >>correcteasy - easier - easiest >>correcthungry - hungrier - hungrest>>correctI started packing my bag yesterday. >>correctI will go to employee training tomorrow. >>correct >>I will go to the EMployee\'s training tomorrow. So I don\'t have enough time to pack my bag. >>correct >>So I don\'t have enough time to pack my things.But there were nothing in my bag yet. >>correctI just spread this and that on my room. >>I just spread everything in my room.There\'s no place to put my feet in my room. >>correctMy heart pounded with excitement. >>correctI couldn\'t focus on my work.>>correctI\'m so nervous. >>correctI can\'t foucs on writing. >>correctSorry.. >>correctWhen you will call tonight, I would be calm down. >>When you will call me tonight, I\'ll be relaxed.  

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