Homework

2012-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I _saw_ an interesting program about artificial intelligence on PBS last week. 2. Several students _brought_ laptops to class yesterday. 3. My father _drove_ to Los Angeles last weekend. 4. Who _ran_ for President in the last election? 5. John Steinbeck _wrote_ about the problems of migrant workers during the Depression. Hi Alice! How was your day? I was fine and dendy. Nowdays I watch the drama named "My sweet city". There are three women, they are the same age as me. So it's interasting and I feel sympathy with them. A famous line from that drama is written below. "Finally, the romance is finding someone to give my heart." See you~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Good job on your homework! You got it all right! I felt happy after our class. You made my day again. Thank you. You did good in class today. I am so proud of you, [이름]! Tell me tomorrow about the drama you are watching, okay? See you! ~Teacher Alice 1. I _saw_ an interesting program about artificial intelligence on PBS last week. >> Correct!2. Several students _brought_ laptops to class yesterday. >> Correct!3. My father _drove_ to Los Angeles last weekend. >> Correct!4. Who _ran_ for President in the last election? >> Correct!5. John Steinbeck _wrote_ about the problems of migrant workers during the Depression.>> Correct!Hi Alice! >> Correct!How was your day? >> Correct! I was fine and dendy. >> Correct! *What do you mean by \"dendy\"?Nowdays I watch the drama named \"My sweet city\". >> I am watching a drama entitled, \"My Sweet City\" these days.There are three women, they are the same age as me. >> Correct! >> OR There are three women who are my age.So it\'s interasting and I feel sympathy with them. >> So it\'s interesting and I sympathize to them.A famous line from that drama is written below. >> Correct!\"Finally, the romance is finding someone to give my heart.\" >> \"Finally, the romance is finding someone whom to give my heart.\"See you~ >> Correct!

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