Homework (157)
학생이 쓴 원문
1. How do you feel about this news?
I\'m angry at the man who made the lion endangered.
2. What can you do to protect some animals from extinction?
I can do campaign with some people.
3. In your opinion, what brings about the extinction of species?
I think it marks the beginning of mankind\'s extinction.
강사 첨삭
Hi there sweet Elly! Thank you for always taking the time to do your homework!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
I\'m angry at the man who made the lion endangered.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I\'m angry at those people who are killing lions.
I can do campaign with some people.
>>I can do campaigns with some people.
I think it marks the beginning of mankind\'s extinction.
>>CORRECT
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