Homework!!

2012-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Make a composition about this: "How can you help after a natural disaster?" I am really concerned about this. There are many disasters all over the world. I can help people with donation or go there to restore broken stores and homes. and I can help through organization like "Save the children" I also did it before. Today I think I am out of mind. I can't concentrate our class. I don't know why. But I'm really sorry. See you tommorrow

강사 첨삭

Hi Philip! It\'s nice to see that you are very much willing to help other people after a disaster. You indeed have a good heart. :) Anyway, why do you think you couldn\'t concentrate on our class? You are doing great during our class, so do not worry. Although, tell me if I have to change my teaching strategy. This might help you focus on our class better. I\'ll see you tomorrow, then Philip! ~Teacher Alice I am really concerned about this. >> Correct! There are many disasters all over the world. >> Correct! I can help people with donation or go there to restore broken stores and homes. >> Correct! >> OR I can help people by giving donation or by going there to restore their broken stores and homes. and I can help through organization like \"Save the children\" I also did it before. >> And I can help through building an organization like \"Save the Children\". I have also did it before. Today I think I am out of mind.  >>  Today I think I am out of my mind.  I can\'t concentrate our class. >> I can\'t concentrate on our class.  I don\'t know why. But I\'m really sorry. See you tomorrow >> Correct!

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