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2012-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Has this work been done by you? 2. Sumit distributed the sweets among his friends. 3. I haven't seen him since yesterday. 4. He was here till yesterday. 5. Do you want me to help you for this? If you could change something about your past, what would you change? One year ago, I had KSAT exam which determines where go to a colleage. I had to get good grades. Because I want to go a more famous colleage. But I worried about the exam's score so much and I was strained. So I got low grades. If I could change my KSAT's scores, I would change this.

강사 첨삭

Hi So Hee,

                 Good morning! Happy Monday! I wish we could really have that chance to change the past. I would also change somethings in my life. I hope to really do it. ^^

~Teacher Verna~

1. Has this work been done by you?

>>Correct
2. Sumit distributed the sweets among his friends.
>>Correct
3. I haven\'t seen him since yesterday.
>>Correct
4. He was here till yesterday.

>>since

5. Do you want me to help you for this? 

>>with
If you could change something about your past, what would you change?
>>Correct

 One year ago, I had KSAT exam which determines where go to a college.

>>A year ago, I had a KSAT exam which determined where I would go for college.

 I had to get good grades.

>>Correct

Because I want to go a more famous colleage.

>>Because I wanted to go to a famous college.

But I worried about the exam\'s score so much and I was strained.

>>Correct

 So I got low grades.

>>Correct

If I could change my KSAT\'s scores, I would change this.

>> If I could change my KSAT\'s scores, I would change it.



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