homework
학생이 쓴 원문
He hitchs me, because a car was coming
I'm reckless, so my mom says to me 'Be careful' everyday
I determined that I won't go Rock festival
I'll obtain my toeic goal
The circumstance is not good
강사 첨삭
Hello there Chloe!
Thank you so much for doing your homework. You did well but you should be careful with your punctuation marks the next time, okay? Since you are constructing sentences do not forget your punctuation marks in the end. :) Have a wonderful day and I\'ll call you agian tomorrow!
He hitchs me, because a car was coming
>>He hitched me because a car was coming.I\'m reckless, so my mom says to me \'Be careful\' everyday>>I\'m reckless, so my says \'be careful\' to be everyday.
I determined that I won\'t go Rock festival>>I\'m determined that I won\'t go to the Rock festival.
I\'ll obtain my toeic goal>>I\'ll obtain my TOEIC goal. (When you are trying to write an abbreviated word try to put it in CAPITAL LETTERS :)
The circumstance is not good
>>CORRECT! (Your sentence here is correct however, you forgot your punctuation mark on the last part of your sentence.)
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