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2012-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Good morning teacher! Today is a special day for me. About 1 years ago, my x-girlfriend gave me orchid to congratulate my joining this company. By the way, found out the orchild begins to bloom this morning! In fact, until now, I have contacted to her since we broke up for her & me. ButToday, the flower makes me contact her. In other words, I sent message to her by cell phone without any expectation to be replied from her. Because her job is elementary shcool teacher, maybe she could check my message after lecture. At first time I sent message, I didn't expect to receive her reply but now I'm look forward to hearing something from her. ^^ Anyway, Here is my homework. 1. When he sees blood, he passes ___ . : over 2. I'm so sorry to hear that your father has passed ___ .; away 3. He tried to pass himself ___ as the leader of the community. ; up 4. He's passed ___ bad moments in his life. ; out 5. If you're clever, you should never pass ___ an opportunity. ; on Wow! Today's homework was very difficult for me. After checking correct answer from you, I'll study again these expressions. See you!

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for your composition. I appreciate everything that you\'re sharing with me. I hope that your x-girlfriend will reply so you can be friends again.. Anyway, have a great lunch and see you tomorrow. __T. Kelly__ Good morning teacher! >>Correct!Today is a special day for me. >>Correct!About 1 years ago, my x-girlfriend gave me orchid to congratulate my joining this company. >> A year ago, my x girlfriend gave me an orchid to congratulate me for joining this company. By the way, found out the orchild begins to bloom this morning! >> I saw this morning that the orchid begins to bloom.In fact, until now, I have contacted to her since we broke up for her & me. >> In fact, I still contact her since we broke up. ButToday, the flower makes me contact her. >> Today, the flower that she gave made me contact her. In other words, I sent message to her by cell phone without any expectation to be replied from her. >> In other words, I sent her a message using my mobile but I\'m not expecting her to reply. Because her job is elementary shcool teacher, maybe she could check my message after lecture.>> Her job is elementary school teacher. Maybe she\'ll check my message after her lecture. At first time I sent message, I didn\'t expect to receive her reply but now I\'m look forward to hearing something from her. ^^>> I didn\'t expect any reply from the first message that I sent her, but now I\'m looking forward to hear something from her.Anyway, Here is my homework.>>Correct!1. When he sees blood, he passes ___ . : over >>When he sees blood, he passes out.2. I\'m so sorry to hear that your father has passed ___ .; away>>Correct! 3. He tried to pass himself ___ as the leader of the community. ; up>> He tried to pass himself off as the leader of the community. 4. He\'s passed ___ bad moments in his life. ; out>> He\'s passed through bad moments in his life. 5. If you\'re clever, you should never pass ___ an opportunity. ; on>> If you\'re clever, you should never pass up an opportunity.Wow! Today\'s homework was very difficult for me. >>Correct!  After checking correct answer from you, I\'ll study again these expressions.  >> After checking your corrections, I\'ll study again these expressions. See you! >>Correct!  

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