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2012-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

I have nothing to need you. It is suffient as you are. I think that this class is much more than before that. I feel we are familiar to each other. Actually, I ashamed when I told you I teached English. I don't almost express very well in my mind. But I am proud of myself. I love to praise my student. For example... "You are a genius","You are a native speaker!!!" "You are better than me~~" "Teach me" I tried and I'll do that like the children . Because They are very innocent~~ I feel that you are too... Have a grace day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for dropping by! Anyway, thanks for making your homework, you always put an extra effort in your lessons. Good job! I placed the corrections and the explanation for each mistakes. Please review the corrections for your improvement. Just let me know if you have any questions okay? Talk to you later! T. Leny^^ Here are my corrections for you: I have nothing to need you.>> I have nothing to tell you. (Please be careful on your sentence structure^^) >>OR I have nothing to ask from you. It is suffient as you are.>> It is suffient as you are? (The thought is incomplete) >> Correct sentence: The information that you need is sufficient. I think that this class is much more than before that.>> I think this class is much better than before. [much more is redundant] I feel we are familiar to each other.>> I feel like we have something in common. Actually, I ashamed when I told you I teached English.>> Actually, I am ashamed when I told you I taught English. I don\'t almost express very well in my mind.>> I almost can\'t express my opinions very well. >> OR I can\'t express my opinions that well. (Better) But I am proud of myself.>> Correct (Good job!) I love to praise my student. For example... >> Correct (Be careful with the use of your punctuation marks)>> I love to praise my student. For example: \"You are a genius\",\"You are a native speaker!!!\">> \"You are a genius\",you are a native speaker!\" (Be careful with the use of your punctuation marks) \"You are better than me~~\" \"Teach me\">> \"You are better than me, can you teach me?\" (Be careful with the use of your punctuation marks) I tried and I\'ll do that like the children . >> I tried practicing English and I\'ll do that like a child.>> I tried practicing English language very well and I\'ll do that like a child. Because They are very innocent~~>> Because they are still young. I feel that you are too...>> Correct >> I feel that you are too. Have a grace day!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >> Have a great day!

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