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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: What invention do you think has had the greatest impact on society? How and why? I think that "smart phone" opened a new horizon of the 21st century and it is a most enormous influential invention in nowadays. Smart phone is a mobile telephone with computer features that may enable it to interact with computerized systems, send e-mails, and access the web. The first smart phone which called "Simon" was invented by the IBM company in 1992. After that, many companies developed their own operating systems. Especially, Apple company announced "iPhone" which has a touch screen technic and multiple functions such like cell phone, camera, GPS and wireless internet in 2007. iPhone was a decisive factor that smart phone bacame popular to ordinary people. Today, people can use diverse applications to make their life more comfortable and abundant. Also, they can share their daily life, opinions and informations with people all around world on a smart phone.

Hello there! Thanks for expressing your opinion as well as your ideas. You even incorporated some information about it. Good job! Anyway, please go over the corrections I made. Have a good day! ~T. Jessie~ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:ESSAY: What invention do you think has had the greatest impact on society? How and why?I think that \"smart phone\" opened a new horizon of the 21st century and it is a most enormous influential invention in nowadays. >> I think that \"smart phones\" opened a new horizon of the 21st century and it is the most influential invention nowadays. OR>> I think that \"smart phones\" opened a new horizon of the 21st century and it has an enormous influence nowadays. Smart phone is a mobile telephone with computer features that may enable it to interact with computerized systems, send e-mails, and access the web. >> Correct! The first smart phone which called \"Simon\" was invented by the IBM company in 1992. >> The first smart phone which is called \"Simon\" was invented by  IBM in 1992. After that, many companies developed their own operating systems. >> Correct! Especially, Apple company announced \"iPhone\" which has a touch screen technic and multiple functions such like cell phone, camera, GPS and wireless internet in 2007. >>  Especially when Apple announced \"iPhone\" which has a touch screen technic and multiple functions such as cell phone, camera, GPS and wireless internet in 2007. iPhone was a decisive factor that smart phone bacame popular to ordinary people. >> iPhone was the decisive factor that made smart phones popular to ordinary people. Today, people can use diverse applications to make their life more comfortable and abundant. >> Correct! Also, they can share their daily life, opinions and informations with people all around world on a smart phone. >> They can also share their daily life, opinions and information with other people all around the world using a smart phone.