Homework 16

ESSAY: What do you think of people who have tattoos? I respect the rights(fondness) of poeple who want to have tattos. In the past, I thought people who have tattoos are scary and not kind. However, these days many people want to have tattoos and tattos became a kind of accessaries to decorate their bodies. The idea that "tattoo is not good" has changed in society and I also think having tattoos is just a fondness of someone. Even when I see the people who have tattoos I think they are fashionable.

Hi there [이름]!^^ How are you? Thank you for you answer!^^ I do agree with you that people should not be judged with tattoos. It has now become a fashion and I think it\'s also pretty!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I respect the rights(fondness) of poeple who want to have tattos. >> I respect the rights(fondness) of poeple who want to have tattoos. In the past, I thought people who have tattoos are scary and not kind. >> CORRECT OR> I had an impression before that tattoed people are scary and unkind.However, these days many people want to have tattoos and tattos became a kind of accessaries to decorate their bodies. >> However, these days many people want to have tattoos and tattos became a kind of an accessory to decorate their bodies. The idea that \"tattoo is not good\" has changed in society and I also think having tattoos is just a fondness of someone. >> The idea that \"tattoo is not good\" has changed in society and I also think having tattoos is just the fondness or choice of someone. Even when I see the people who have tattoos I think they are fashionable. >> CORRECT OR> I now think of people who have tatoos as fashionable people.