homework 16
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What has a greater influence on a person's ambitiousness, family, genes, or the culture in which he/she is raised? Why do you think so?
I think family is the strongest factor of that.
People live in a certain culture and someone's sun or daughter.
Ambitious people could found all over the world likes general, famous CEO each countries historically.
So, cultural factor isn't thought important than family.
As a family member, children can see parent's job, character of life everyday in their childhood.
it influence their acting, relationship and dream easily.
Because they haven't been experience before. all that they see, listen and feel are first. so it may natural phenomenon.
강사 첨삭
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By the way, I just do hope you will keep up the good work okay? I do believe in you. I hope you will also believe in yourself.^^Take care always and have a great day!
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What has a greater influence on a person\'s ambitiousness, family, genes, or the culture in which he/she is raised? Why do you think so?I think family is the strongest factor of that. >>I think family has the strongest influence to us.People live in a certain culture and someone\'s sun or daughter. >>People live in different cultures and traditions.Ambitious people could found all over the world likes general, famous CEO each countries historically.>>Many ambitious people could be found all over the world.So, cultural factor isn\'t thought important than family.>>So cultural factor isn\'t as important as the family\'s.As a family member, children can see parent\'s job, character of life everyday in their childhood.>>As a family member, children can see their parents\' jobs, experience their childhood and way of living.it influence their acting, relationship and dream easily.>>They can influence their actions. relationship and dreams.Because they haven\'t been experience before.
>>Because they haven\'t experienced those before.
all that they see, listen and feel are first. so it may natural phenomenon.
>>It will be quite normal for them to experience those for the first time.
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