Homework#16
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher! Good Evening! Today I am more interested in English. I met a foriegn person on the street. He asked me how to go to the restrauant. In the past, I can\'t speak the direction in English. But, now I can say some sentences to explain what I say. This experience make me more exciting about speaking English! So, I always think that it is thanks to you.
HW#16 Talk about the fashion differences between ASIAN and WESTERN countries.
First, I think the most diffrence between asian and western countries is that the western people are ususally wearing casual clothes.
For example, My friends are usually wearing a casual suit. I don\'t know that a casual suit is used in English countries. Anyway, I saw manytimes that the western people are wearing casual clothes like jeans, check-patternd shirt and so on. This is the most diffrence about the fashion
In addtion, I think the asians, specially in korea, care about what the other people think about their fashion.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jonathan!
Haha! Nice to hear about your experience. I am so happy to know that you are becoming more confident.
If you keep practicing, you can even be the one to start a conversation with a foreigner.
Here are my corrections.
First, I think the most diffrence between asian and western countries is that the western people are ususally wearing casual clothes.
>>First, I think the most difference between Asian and Western countries is that the western people are usually wearing casual clothes.
For example, My friends are usually wearing a casual suit. I don\'t know that a casual suit is used in English countries.
>>For example, my friends are usually wearing a casual suit. I don\'t know that a casual suit is used in English countries.
Anyway, I saw manytimes that the western people are wearing casual clothes like jeans, check-patternd shirt and so on.
>>Anyway, I saw western people wearing casual clothes like jeans, and check-patterned shirts many times.
This is the most diffrence about the fashion
>>This is their biggest difference about the fashion.
In addtion, I think the asians, specially in korea, care about what the other people think about their fashion.
>>In addition, I think Asians, especially Korea, cares about what other people think about their fashion.
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