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2012-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

학생이 쓴 원문

. I (look for)___am looking for____ my pen. 2. Jane (print out) ___printed out____ the contract. 3. As long as I am on holiday, Hannah and John (take care) ___take care___ of everything. 4. Look! Graham (wear) is wearing____ a tie today. 5. That's because he (meet)__will meet____ the big bos in the afternoon. Hi Leny! You always understand me enough. It's not used to taking a rest on weekend. Maybe,I seem to be an workaholic. But I'll try to seek something worthy. My children have grown up already. I will ready to study abroad. I am considering to go to Manila or San Francisco.^~^ I believe that It will be come true. Have a great day!

강사 첨삭

Dearest Ms. [Name]! It\'s always my pleasure to teach you each day. I could see a lot of improvement from you as well. I\'m proud to be a part of your growth in your skills in English. The following are some of my suggestions on your sentences. Feel free to ask questions on Wednesday if you have any. True enough that your children are grown up already. It\'s time for you to look after yourself already. You should see to it that you feel good inside and out always because at your age, you should be enjoying your life. Thank you, ---LENY---- . I (look for)___am looking for____ my pen. >>Correct!2. Jane (print out) ___printed out____ the contract. >>is printing out3. As long as I am on holiday, Hannah and John (take care) ___take care___ of everything. >>are taking care 4. Look! Graham (wear) is wearing____ a tie today. >>Correct!5. That\'s because he (meet)__will meet____ the big bos in the afternoon. >>is meetingHi Leny! >>Correct!You always understand me enough. >>Correct! >>You always understand me.It\'s not used to taking a rest on weekend. >>I\'m not used to taking a rest on weekends.Maybe,I seem to be an workaholic. >>Maybe, I seem to be a workaholic.But I\'ll try to seek something worthy. >>Correct!My children have grown up already. >>Correct1I will ready to study abroad.>>I will prepare to study abroad. I am considering to go to Manila or San Francisco.^~^ >>I am considering to go to Manila or San Francisco. I believe that It will be come true. >>I believe that it will come true.Have a great day! >>Correct!  

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