Homework

Where do you want to spend your summer vacation? Why did you choose this place? Write in not more than 10 sentences. My favorite place for my summer vacation is the largest library in my town. There is an air conditioner, which prevents sweating from the hot weather. In addition, the building cheaply offers some healthy meals for visitors. Most of them studying hard are satisfied with facilities of there. One of the greatest installation is set up the Wi-Fi everywhere. Atmosphere of the large room, however, gets more noisy due to the students using the phone with the WiFi for free. Even though there are some distractions students or others make, it's not problematic for me to concerntrate on my studying. For those reason, the most gorgeous place for my summer vacation is the library. Alas, I can hear the sound from a Water park in the library! Terrible XD.

Hey there!^_^ Thank you for dropping by our composition board. I am happy while reading your composition because it shows that you are a studious person. You make sure that you still learn something even though it\'s your summer vacation. Other kids may consider to go to the beach but for you, you will just stay in the library and read something. Good job! You should see to it though that you will have time to enjoy or give yourself a break. Have a good day! ----Teacher Chloe---- Here are my corrections for you: My favorite place for my summer vacation is the largest library in my town. >>>Correct! >>>My favorite place to go during summer vacation is the largest library in my town.There is an air conditioner, which prevents sweating from the hot weather.>>>Correct! >>>There is an air conditioner which makes me feel cooler. In addition, the building cheaply offers some healthy meals for visitors.>>>Correct! >>>In adition, the establishent offers some cheap but healthy meals to visitors. Most of them studying hard are satisfied with facilities of there. >>>Most people who study hard in the library are satisfied with the facilities there.One of the greatest installation is set up the Wi-Fi everywhere.>>>One of the greatest installation set up everywhere in the building is the Wi-Fi zone. Atmosphere of the large room, however, gets more noisy due to the students using the phone with the WiFi for free. >>>However, the atmosphere of the large room gets noisy when students use their phones with the free Wi-Fi.Even though there are some distractions students or others make, it\'s not problematic for me to concerntrate on my studying.>>>Even though there are distractions, it\'s not a problem for me because I always concentrate with what I\'m studying. For those reason, the most gorgeous place for my summer vacation is the library. >>>These are the reason why the library is the most gorgeous place for me during summer vacation.Alas, I can hear the sound from a Water park in the library! Terrible XD. >>>Alas! I can still hear the sound from the Water Park in the library! Terrible!