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2020-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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1. Every 4 years, we get one extra day and this is celebrated in many cultures. They want to make the day special because it is a kind of blessing to have an extra day for that year. If you choose to, how would you celebrate \"Leap Day\"? I will do many special things. 2. What would you do if your birthday falls on February 29? I will celebrate my birthday more specially when my birthday is on February 29. 3. How important is a day to you? Do you think a day can make a huge difference to your life? Yes, I think a day can make a huge difference to my life.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Great work!

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow!

~Teacher Sheila


I will do many special things.
>>CORRECT

I will celebrate my birthday more specially when my birthday is on February 29.
>>I will celebrate my birthday more especially when my birthday is on February 29.
OR>>I will celebrate my birthday in a special way when my birthday is on February 29.

Yes, I think a day can make a huge difference to my life.
>>CORRECT

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