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2012-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello teacher. Today is rainny day in Seoul. What`s the weather in Baguio city? I like don`t rainny day. This weather is so humid. My shoes are wet. The umbrella of the bus they are dripping wet. This day, I hope rest in my sweet house with hot black coffee. 1. I haven't got 뀉 C . any brothers or sisters 2. B . Where is playing Real Madrid? 3. David is the boss, you need to speak to �.. B . him 4. B . Give the book to Sarah. 5. D . Mark usually fast eats

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름], A great Thursday! Good afternoon! I am really amazed about your composition. You expressed yourself in complex sentences. Keep it up! As they say practice makes perfect. Take note of the corrections I made for you. You can do it. Take care! T. Verna ^^ Hello teacher. >>CorrectToday is rainy day in Seoul. >>Correct  What`s the weather in Baguio city? >>CorrectI like don`t rainny day. >>I don\'t like rainy day. This weather is so humid. >>CorrectMy shoes are wet. >>Correct  The umbrella of the bus they are dripping wet.>>The bus umbrella is wet.This day, I hope rest in my sweet house with hot black coffee.>>Today, I hope to take a rest in my sweet 1. I haven\'t got C . any brothers or sisters >>Correct2. B . Where is playing Real Madrid? >>C .  Where is Real Madrid playing?3. David is the boss, you need to speak to �.. B . him>>Correct4. B . Give the book to Sarah.>>Correct5. D . Mark usually fast eats . >>Mark usually eats fast.

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