homework

2012-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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1.I am a secular and selfish person. His works include both scred and secular(Find out the internet) 2.Always he is contrite to me, but I can't accept his appology. A proper and contrite appology is needed. 3.I have a direct antithesis of his opinion. Love is the antithesis of selfishness. Lovely Leny! You are so smart and thoughtful. Thank you for your advice. Have a nice Wednesday!

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]!^^ Happy Wednesday! I appreciate the time you gave in doing your homework. You were able to use the words correctly. Keep on enhancing your skills. Have a great evening! ---T. Leny ^^ Here are my corrections for you: 1.I am a secular and selfish person. >> CorrectHis works include both scred and secular(Find out the internet) >> His works include both sacred and secular. ( I found it in the internet)2.Always he is contrite to me, but I can\'t accept his appology. >> He is always contrite towards me but I can\'t accept his apology.A proper and contrite appology is needed. >> Correct3.I have a direct antithesis of his opinion. >> Correct >> OR: I directly oppose his opinion. Love is the antithesis of selfishness.>> CorrectLovely Leny! >> Correct (Thanks=))You are so smart and thoughtful. >> CorrectThank you for your advice. >> Correct >>OR Thank you for your pieces of advice.Have a nice Wednesday! >> Correct

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