homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.I am a secular and selfish person.
His works include both scred and secular(Find out the internet)
2.Always he is contrite to me, but I can't accept his appology.
A proper and contrite appology is needed.
3.I have a direct antithesis of his opinion.
Love is the antithesis of selfishness.
Lovely Leny!
You are so smart and thoughtful.
Thank you for your advice.
Have a nice Wednesday!
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!^^
Happy Wednesday! I appreciate the time you gave in doing your homework. You were able to use the words correctly. Keep on enhancing your skills. Have a great evening!
---T. Leny ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
1.I am a secular and selfish person.
>> CorrectHis works include both scred and secular(Find out the internet)
>> His works include both sacred and secular. ( I found it in the internet)2.Always he is contrite to me, but I can\'t accept his appology.
>> He is always contrite towards me but I can\'t accept his apology.A proper and contrite appology is needed.
>> Correct3.I have a direct antithesis of his opinion.
>> Correct
>> OR: I directly oppose his opinion. Love is the antithesis of selfishness.>> CorrectLovely Leny!
>> Correct (Thanks=))You are so smart and thoughtful.
>> CorrectThank you for your advice.
>> Correct
>>OR Thank you for your pieces of advice.Have a nice Wednesday!
>> Correct
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