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Hi~ T.Ritchel^^ I made some sentences about Korean pop star by using words you gave me. Korean pop stars are proficient at singing and dancing. Also, some stars are proficient in several language. My favorite Korean pop star is F(x) which has extraordinary appearance and an exquisite sense of songs. There are 3 Korean, 1 American and 1 Chinese. They are a girl group that engages both the mind and the eye. When I see one of F(x)'s members, I was curious whether the person is a man or a woman. After I searched internet I was perplexed by the article about F(x). The person is a woman Her name is Amber who comes from America. Her parents are from China. F(x) have diverse nationalities. Difference is their decisive attractive point. I like their songs, fashion and diverse. They said "We were greatly encouraged by the positive response of the public" I hope them to became a world group. I will cheer them up.

Hello [이름]! Wow! You slept late this morning? Anyway, thank you so much for doing your homework. This is quite impressive. I hope that you will keep this up. I am looking forward to talking with you in class today. Have fun! :) Hi~ T.Ritchel^^ >>CORRECT! >>Hi, T. Ritchel!I made some sentences about Korean pop star by using words you gave me. >>I made some sentence about a Korean pop star by using the words that you gave me.Korean pop stars are proficient at singing and dancing. >>CORRECT! Also, some stars are proficient in several language. >>Also, some stars are proficient in several languages.My favorite Korean pop star is F(x) which has extraordinary appearance and an exquisite sense of songs. >>My favorite Korean pop star is F(x) which has an extraordinary appearance and an exquisite sense of songs. There are 3 Korean, 1 American and 1 Chinese. >>There are 3 Koreans, 1 American and 1 Chinese in that group. They are a girl group that engages both the mind and the eye. >>CORRECT!When I see one of F(x)\'s members, I was curious whether the person is a man or a woman. >>When I saw one of the F(x)\'s members, I was curious as to whether that person is a man or a woman. After I searched internet I was perplexed by the article about F(x). >>After searching in the internet, I was perplexed by the article about F(x). The person is a woman Her name is Amber who comes from America. >>The person is a woman, her name is Amber who came from America. Her parents are from China. >>CORRECT! F(x) have diverse nationalities. >>CORRECT! Difference is their decisive attractive point. >>The difference is their decisive attractive point. I like their songs, fashion and diverse. >>I like their songs, fashion and their diversity. They said \"We were greatly encouraged by the positive response of the public\" I hope them to became a world group. >>They said, \"We were greatly encouraged by the positive response of the public\". I hope for them to become world famous. I will cheer them up. >>I will cheer for them.