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Many Koreans are afraid of foreigners.
Because our language is not English, they are small size compared to the American or European.
I saw a Black for the first time in N.Y.
It was midnight so I was scared, too.
This is not a racism, It is just different wavelengths.
This question reminds me of something.
Michael Jackson's "Black or White"
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Happy Monday! I am very happy to receive your composition. Anyway, I think we can never avoid to have different perceptions about things. It's inevitable. It's just that we have to respect other's opinions for them to respect ours, too. Like what you have mentioned, we're not on the same wavelength. See you in class!
-T. Alice-
Many Koreans are afraid of foreigners.
>> Correct.Because our language is not English, they are small size compared to the American or European.
>> Some factors are because, first, our language is not English. Also, we are smaller compared to Americans or Europeans. I saw a Black for the first time in N.Y.
>> Correct.
Or
>> I saw a Black American for the first time in New York.It was midnight so I was scared, too.
>> It was midnight, so I was scared, too.This is not a racism, It is just different wavelengths.>> This is not racism. We're just not on the same wavelength.
(We use the idiom: ON THE SAME WAVELENGTH)This question reminds me of something. Michael Jackson\'s \"Black or White\"
>> Correct.
Or
>> This question reminds me of something: Michael Jackson\'s \"Black or White\" song.
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