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2012-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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Global warming is one of the great disasters. First of all, We have to reduse using the cars, airconditioners,and electronic things. After that We also must plant the trees. It must be hesitated to developing new and nuclear weapon. Is it clear common knowledge? Isn't it? Lovely Leny! I must be sick. Especially I can't express speaking in English on Monday. It is named "Monday desease". I know well what you are worried. I'm not alone. Don't worry about me. Because our conversation topic is very deficient, We always are talking about our family. It's the hardest thing of you. Whenever you may teach me with textbook. I always appreciate your concern. See you on Wednesday!

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name]. [Name],^^          I\'m deeply thankful for your genuine concern for me. I feel so lucky to have such a sensitive and generous student like you. Thanks for doing your homework once again. I\'m looking forward to our next class. Have a nice day! T. Leny. Global warming is one of the great disasters. >>Correct!First of all, We have to reduse using the cars, airconditioners,and electronic things. >>First of all, we have to reduce using cars, air conditioners and electronic things. After that We also must plant the trees. >>After that, we also must plant trees.It must be hesitated to developing new and nuclear weapon. >>We have to be cautious about developing new nuclear weapons. >>We have to be cautious about industrialization and building nuclear weapons.Is it clear common knowledge? >>Correct! Isn\'t it?>>Correct!Lovely Leny! >>Correct! ^_^ Thank you :DI must be sick. >>Correct!Especially I can\'t express speaking in English on Monday. >>I coudn\'t speak well this Monday.>>I especially can\'t express myself in English on Mondays.It is named \"Monday desease\". >>It is called \"Monday sickness\".I know well what you are worried. >>I know well that you are worried.I\'m not alone. Don\'t worry about me. >>Correct!Because our conversation topic is very deficient, >>Correct! >> Because our conversation topic is very deficient. (Be careful of the correct punctuation mark)We always are talking about our family. >>We are always talking about our families. >>We always talk about our families.It\'s the hardest thing of you. >>It\'s the hardest thing for you.Whenever you may teach me with textbook. >>You may teach me the textbook whenever you like.I always appreciate your concern. >>Correct!See you on Wednesday! >>Correct!

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