Homework :)

2012-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

학생이 쓴 원문

<Homework> 1.arrogant - The Scrooge is a one of the fairy tale's protagonist. The Scrooge is too arrogant, many people don't like him. 2.dilate - The spider on my arms. When I realized that my eyes dilated with fear. 3.imposter - A police said "The imposter was arrested in the shop.", but the victims are still exist. 4.disable - Please don't discriminate between the disabled and the non-disabled people. 5.conquer - Most of the villain in the movie, they want to conquer the world.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Are you having a great day so far? I hope so. Anyway I\'ve listed down some suggestions below. Kindly read through it if you have time. Thanks! T. Ritchel 1.arrogant- The Scrooge is a one of the fairy tale\'s protagonist.The Scrooge is too arrogant, many people don\'t like him.>>Correct!2.dilate- The spider on my arms.When I realized that my eyes dilated with fear.>>When I realized that, my eyes dilated with fear. (there should be a comma)3.imposter- A police said \"The imposter was arrested in the shop.\", but the victims are still exist.>>A policeman said \"The imposter was arrested in the shop.\", but the crimes still persisted.4.disable- Please don\'t discriminate between the disabled and the non-disabled people.>>Correct! >>Please don\'t discriminate the disabled people.5.conquer- Most of the villain in the movie, they want to conquer the world. >>Most of the villains in the movies want to conquier the world.

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