Homework

1. He adviced the employee to rewrite the proposal. -> He advised the employee to rewrite the proposal. 2. I want to go over to these statistics very carefully so everyone can see my point. -> I want to go over to these statistics very carefully so that everyone can see my point. 3. It is the strong recommend of the committee that the project be funded. -> It is the strong recommendation of the committee that the project should be funded. 4. My finally point is that we need to give more attention to this area in the future. -> My final point is that we need to give more attention to this area in the future. 5. She made hand outs of her slides to help the audience write notes during the presentation. -> She made handouts of her slides to help the audience write notes during the presentation. Ooops homework was difficult. haha I hope that I get a nice score at last. See you tomorrow. No excuse and story today. See you tomorrow

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today. Well, I can see that this homework is quite difficult for you. I\'m seriously considering to give you this kind of homework everyday. You did well, but you have to take a second look on your answers. Take care and have a great time. See you in class later. T. JanE ^^ 1. He adviced the employee to rewrite the proposal.-> He advised the employee to rewrite the proposal. >> Correct 2. I want to go over to these statistics very carefully so everyone can see my point.-> I want to go over to these statistics very carefully so that everyone can see my point.>> I want to go over these statistics very carefully so everyone can see my point.3. It is the strong recommend of the committee that the project be funded.-> It is the strong recommendation of the committee that the project should be funded.>> Correct 4. My finally point is that we need to give more attention to this area in the future.-> My final point is that we need to give more attention to this area in the future.>> Correct 5. She made hand outs of her slides to help the audience write notes during the presentation.-> She made handouts of her slides to help the audience write notes during the presentation.>> Correct Ooops homework was difficult. haha >> Correct I hope that I get a nice score at last.>> Correct See you tomorrow. >> Correct No excuse and story today. >> Correct See you tomorrow >> Correct