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2012-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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Hello teacher. Today was so happy this morning. I am so thankful your teaching me. Before i've get homework i searched for Baguio. I was so impressed with Rice Terrace. I really envy you living in a beautiful city. I think Korea is wealthy country, but the country can't afford that in mind I think. So I like the countryside. Have a relaxed mind and want to live in Rice Terrace. I have a business trip in May next Year in Batangas Philippines. I had ever been on a business trip for 8 hours to Manila.13 years ago and I was so disappointed short time. I will go to a business trip to the Philippines again next year at this time is thinking to travel. I must study English hard for business trip or traval. Have nice day. Bye. HOMEWORK 1.Which seems enjoyable to you seems troublesome to me. 2There is something else in what you say. 3.A: I think I broke my left leg. B: I hope not. 4.They like him and her better than mine. 5.Is there something wrong with your feet?

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Hello there! Nice work here, I think you did your best in your composition and homework. Just have further practice and I know you\'ll be better soon! Well, I hope you are enjoying your day. Thanks a lot and see you =) T. Nica =) Hello teacher. >> Correct! Today was so happy this morning. >> Today was a happy morning. >> I was so happy this morning.I am so thankful your teaching me. >> I am so thankful you\'re teaching me. >> I am so thankful to you for teaching me.Before i\'ve get homework i searched for Baguio. >> Before I did my homework, I searched for Baguio. I was so impressed with Rice Terrace. >> I was so impressed with the Rice Terraces.I really envy you living in a beautiful city. >> Correct!I think Korea is wealthy country, but the country can\'t afford that in mind I think. >> I think Korea is a wealthy country but it can\'t afford that thing.So I like the countryside. >> Correct!Have a relaxed mind and want to live in Rice Terrace. >> To have a relaxed mind and live in Rice Terraces.I have a business trip in May next Year in Batangas Philippines. >> I have a business trip in May next year in Batangas, Philippines.I had ever been on a business trip for 8 hours to Manila.13 years ago and I was so disappointed short time. >> I have been on a business trip for 8 hours to Manila 13 years ago, and I was so disappointed for that short time.I will go to a business trip to the Philippines again next year at this time is thinking to travel. >> I will go for a business trip in the Philippines again next year, and this time I\'m thinking of travelling.I must study English hard for business trip or traval.>> I must study English very hard for my business trip and travel. Have nice day. >> Correct! Bye. >> Correct!HOMEWORK 1.Which seems enjoyable to you seems troublesome to me. >> What seems to be enjoyable to you seems troublesome to me.2There is something else in what you say. >> Correct!3.A: I think I broke my left leg. B: I hope not. >> Correct!4.They like him and her better than mine. >> They like his and hers better than mine.5.Is there something wrong with your feet? >> Is there anything wrong with your feet?

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