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2012-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi Jane, First thing is first 1. body d. company name and address at the top of a page 2. layout c. greeting 3. letterhead a. how the parts are arranged 4. salutation b. main information in a letter 5. signature e. name written at the bottom of a letter Yes, time flies so fast. We have known each other for two weeks. You know I always feel guilty when we have class because of my laziness. As you know I am lenient to myself. That's why I did other things prior to my things. It's really hard to change my route. However, I will change it. You will see how well I change. If not, please yelling me. See you tomorrow

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! You are so consistent when it comes o your homework. Anyway, don\'t feel so guilty about your performance. I don\'t think your performance is bad after all. Preparing in advance is a good habit though. Let me see then how well you will change. I\'m looking forward to that. Take care and have a worry-free day! T. JanE ^^ Hi Jane, >> Correct First thing is first>> Correct 1. body d. company name and address at the top of a page>> body - d. main information in a letter2. layout c. greeting>> layout - c. how the parts are arranged3. letterhead a. how the parts are arranged>> letterhead - a. company name and address at the top of a page4. salutation b. main information in a letter>> salutation - b. greeting5. signature e. name written at the bottom of a letter>> Correct Yes, time flies so fast. >> Correct We have known each other for two weeks. >> we have known each other for two weeks now.You know I always feel guilty when we have class because of my laziness. >> Correct As you know I am lenient to myself. >> Correct That\'s why I did other things prior to my things. >> Correct It\'s really hard to change my route. >> Correct However, I will change it. >> Correct You will see how well I change. >> Correct If not, please yelling me. >> If not, please yell at me.See you tomorrow. >> Correct  

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