homework

2012-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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1. Despite her parents complaints, she decided to live by (herself) in New York City. 2. If you happen to see your parents this weekend, give (them) my best regards. 3. I can't understand (her) when she speaks German with (me). 4. He should be ashamed of (himself) . 5. Mary was worried about the children, so she convinced (her) husband not to accept the job abroad. I reviewed today's class by making a conversation with using sentences in Ch6. (A is in the car, B is on the street.) A : Hey, Long time no see. Where are you going too early? B : Hi I'm going to the supermarket. Today is my mother's birthday. So I ganna make some special food. That's why I want to go there. A : Oh You're so kind. If you don't mind, I want you to bring there. I have to go there because I need to buy a carton of milk for breakfast. Get in my car! B : Really? Thanks. Actually I'm about to take a taxi.

강사 첨삭

Hey there! I'm so amazed with your determination and initiative! I wanna thank you for doing your homework. You did it so perfectly! I really appreciate you as well for reviewing our lesson for today, that's awesome! Please review the corrections that I have made for you. See you tomorrow! T. Lara ^__^ Here are my corrections for you: 1. Despite her parents complaints, she decided to live by (herself) in New York City. >> Correct2. If you happen to see your parents this weekend, give (them) my best regards. >> Correct3. I can\'t understand (her) when she speaks German with (me). >> Correct4. He should be ashamed of (himself) . >> Correct5. Mary was worried about the children, so she convinced (her) husband not to accept the job abroad. >> CorrectI reviewed today\'s class by making a conversation with using sentences in Ch6. >> I reviewed today's class by making a conversation by using sentences in Ch6.(A is in the car, B is on the street.) >> Correct >> OR >> Situation will be A is in the car and B is on the street.A : Hey, Long time no see. Where are you going too early? >> Hey, long time no see. Where are you going?It\'s too early.B : Hi I\'m going to the supermarket. >> Hi, I\'m going to the supermarket. Today is my mother\'s birthday. >> Correct >> OR >> My mother is celebrating her birthday today. So I ganna make some special food. That\'s why I want to go there. >> So I\'m gonna make some special food that\'s why I want to go there. >> OR >> I\'m gonna prepare some special food that\'s why I need go there.A : Oh You\'re so kind. >> Correct >> OR >> That\'s kind of you! If you don\'t mind, I want you to bring there. >> Correct >> OR >> If you don\'t mind, you can just ride in my car and I will bring you there. I have to go there because I need to buy a carton of milk for breakfast. >> Correct Get in my car! >> CorrectB : Really? Thanks. Actually I\'m about to take a taxi. >> Correct

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