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Kelly, Good afternoon! I typed today's our dialogue as below ; Please check which expresstion or grammer was not correct. "Today is payday, when makes me feel happy. It seems like Most people feels happier when payday is around the corner. And so am I. Also I feel that my job is worth working for a while at that time. But unfortunatelly, these happiness is the only moment because I have to make a card payment for last month and save money into a installment savings account each month. After that, it just remains a little money in my pocket. How much pocket money do you use in a month including cell phone charge, transportation fee, buying a food and enjoying the entertainment such as cinema? There is a old saying like this. "A penny saved is a penny gained" I'm certain taht you will be rich woman if you are saving the money." Have a good time!

Hi there! I feel really happy during payday as well. But every month I have to make sure that I\'ll be able to budget my money accordingly. I have so many expenses and things I want to do. I wish I could earn more so that I can do more things but then again I\'m happy with my job and what I do. Anyway, it\'s always my pleasure checking your compositions. Hope to hear from you again soon. T. Kelly Kelly, Good afternoon!>>Kelly, good afternoon! OR >>Good afternoon Kelly!I typed today\'s our dialogue as below ; >>I typed our dialogue today.Please check which expresstion or grammer was not correct.>>Please check my incorrect expression or grammar. \"Today is payday, when makes me feel happy. >>Today is payday which makes me feel happy. >>Payday makes me feel happy.It seems like Most people feels happier when payday is around the corner. >>It seems like most people feel happier during payday.And so am I. >>Correct!Also I feel that my job is worth working for a while at that time. >> I feel that my job is worth it for a while. >> I feel that my job is worth it at that time.But unfortunatelly, these happiness is the only moment because I have to make a card paymentfor last month and save money into a installment savings account each month. >>But unfortunately, this happiness is short lived because I have to pay for my bills and put money on my savings account every month.After that, it just remains a little money in my pocket.>>After that, I\'m left with a little amount of money in my pocket. >>After that, I only have little money left in my pocket.How much pocket money do you use in a month including cell phone charge, transportation fee, buying a food and enjoying the entertainment such as cinema?>>How much pocket money do you use in a month including the cell phone charge, transportation fee, food and leisures like going to a cinema to watch films? There is a old saying like this. >>There is an old saying that goes like this:\"A penny saved is a penny gained\" >>Correct!I\'m certain taht you will be rich woman if you are saving the money.\">>I\'m certain that you will be a rich woman if you are saving money.