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2012-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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1. Who wrote the book "Of Mice and Men"? correct 2. When they get married? Incorrect When do they get married? 3. What caused the boy's death? Incorrect What did the boy's death cause? 4. How long will it took you to get there? Incorrect How long will it take you to get there? 5. Where he born? Incorrect Where is he born? Tomorrow, at last 2012 London Olympic will open. I look forward to that. You know, my girlfriend is in london because of her language studing. But she is more interested Sports than study in my thought. Today also she choose watching soccer match instead of her afternoon class. So I'm concerned about her school work a little. I believe that she control by herself. Anyhow I'm expected Korean representatives will win gold medals a lot! Brace up! Korea!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Kim  WoW!! I think not only you but a lot of Koreans are waiting and are going to watch that game. And I also do wish that your players will collect a lot of gold medals this time. Aja!! Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Lara Here are my corrcetions for you: 1. Who wrote the book \"Of Mice and Men\"?correct>> Correct2. When they get married?IncorrectWhen do they get married?>> Correct3. What caused the boy\'s death?IncorrectWhat did the boy\'s death cause?>> What caused the boy\'s death?4. How long will it took you to get there?IncorrectHow long will it take you to get there?>> Correct5. Where he born?IncorrectWhere is he born?>> Where was he born?Tomorrow, at last 2012 London Olympic will open. >> At last, tomorrow\'s the opening day of 2012 London Olympic. >> At last, tomorrow will be the opening of the 2012 London Olympic.I look forward to that. >> I am looking forward to that.You know, my girlfriend is in london because of her language studing. >> You know, my girlfriend is in London because of her langauge study.But she is more interested Sports than study in my thought. >> But I think she is more interested in sports than her study.Today also she choose watching soccer match instead of her afternoon class. >> She choose to watch the soccer match today instead of attending her afternoon class.So I\'m concerned about her school work a little. >> Correct >> So I\'m quite concerned about her school work.I believe that she control by herself. >>  I believe that it\'s within her self-control.Anyhow I\'m expected Korean representatives will win gold medals a lot! >> Anyway, I\'m expected that the Korean players will win a lot of gold medals.Brace up! Korea!! >> Correct

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