Homework (168)
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Do you want to learn sign language? Why?
I want to learn sign language because that helps me to talk with the deaf.
2. Do you know anyone with a hearing disability? Describe him or her.
I know Ludwig van Beethoven. He is a composer and he was not a deaf since birth. He got deaf when he was 32 years old.
3. What is the importance of communication among peers?
If we have good communication,then we can make friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! Good job!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
I know Ludwig van Beethoven.
>>CORRECT
He is a composer and he was not a deaf since birth.
>>He is a composer and he was not deaf since birth.
He got deaf when he was 32 years old.
>>CORRECT
>>CORRECT
OR>>He became deaf when he was 32 years old.
If we have good communication,then we can make friends.
>>If we have good communication then we can make friends.
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